Welcome to the Empire of the Covenant! In this federal empire, tensions are increasing between the Light and Dark political factions. Light Lady Annabelle is the target of the Leader of the Dark faction and in order to gain allies to protect her, she starts Courtship Rituals to make suitors compete for her hand—but then the Dark Lord joins in. Come read about Annabelle's Courtship and her world!
Introduction to the story | Lady Annabelle Alyssenne | The imperial nobility | Novel upcoming
Damn, I was really rooting for Aline. So positive and full of energy, even decided to wait under a dead cow, which who knows how she would drag all the way to the mountains... To what end?...
I'd love to see the sparks during a magical storm. What is a typical/average size of the swarm? Does it increase in size during the storm, i.e., do they join to form a larger swarm?
Also... magical silk and STORM MUSHROOMS! Silk sounds fun, especially a blue one, but the mushrooms pique my interest, especially since Aline was looking for them. Honestly, until the very end I thought you were introducing a new character for a short story...
I live to toment the readers :p But minor self palm because I didn't think about the possibility of bringing in the MCs of book 2 and 3 who live just next to the mountains (which is why I'm doing all this worldbuilding around the area). There may be a good occasion to have them appear in the next articles!
The mushrooms will definitely be coming soon, and I have articles planned about silk worm, magical materials and weaving magic, so that should cover all aspect of the silk XD Not sure if I'll get everything done this month, but they will be written at some point.
For the size of the swarm, I'd say something between a hundred to a thousand sparks probably for an establish colony. And since storms can cover vast areas, all the different nearby colonies would come out at the same time and mingle together. I might add that the particularly big storms that encompass the whole mountains are a kind of festival for them when they all get to meet and exchange gossip.
Thanks for the comment :D
Lovely article! I especially liked the detailed description of their biology, and the fact that they might be willing to make deals to get silk for their nests. And interleaving the article with the girl's story is a great idea - I'm kinda sad that she ended this way, but not too surprised. The sarcasm in the quote boxes foreshadowed her demise pretty well.
(By the way, you spelled her name "Alice" in the second and third quote, and "Aline" in the others.)
Thanks for the comment and pointing out the typo :D I might like killing characters in the quotes a little bit too much XD But I'm also trying to do something different in some of the other articles I'm writing this month and to also bring in people from the novels, so the characters may have some change of survival after all XD
Thanks for the comment :D I think it could have gone both way with Aline but that I would have needed a lot more words to show how she could have survived. The plan wasn't bad in itself, she was just too self assured and underestimated how petty the sparks can be... :(
This is a really neat article, the story about Aline mixed in with the information was especially entertaining. The layout is nice, and the information is well thought out. Great job!
Ah yes, why not make the storms even freakier by throwing giant kinda-murderous insects into the mix! Amélie, your articles always leave me in awe, they are so detailed, yet so easy to read, which is a rare skill in the worldanvillands of many words and long articles :D I like how you focused more on the "social" aspects of the species and the article is not a simple "biological" breakdown like many other species articles out there. That makes it stand out and I find it refreshing.
And I really enjoyed the progression of Aline's quotes :)
Thanks! Coming up with the social aspects was really fun, and it gave me an interesting idea for featuring them in my novel :D In the end, while biology is interesting, not a lot of it is going to be seen/known by the characters, whereas the interactions with humans is often really we care about :p
I like the way these are characterized. Just because something is intelligent, it doesn't mean you can communicate with it. At the same time, just because something is dangerous, doesn't mean it's actively malevolent. These things really just want to do their own thing and be left alone, don't they? :P
Well, left alone, left alone... the sparks don't really mind when food walk up right next to them XD If you can survive long enough to prove that you're not food, then they might be willing to interact more. Or maybe not. They just normally don't think about humans all that much because luckily the storms keep both species apart.
Thanks for the comment :D
A really good article. I like the images used, The information is great, and i just like the idea of magical storm infused insects. Aemon
Thanks! It was fun to come up with these insects :D