Quantum Keys
Unlock the power through locks and keys
Quantum keys are uncommon but to call them rare is not quite right. Almost anyone who is somewhat traveled has seen the effects these keys have at least once. Even the most illiterate and uncultured know of their existence and what they can do. Despite this one will likely strike fear and wonder into the hearts of those around them upon use.
Perceptions
Impact
In the Americas, The Pauper Kings pay handsomely for any Quantum keys you can give to them as well as the locks that increase the power they bestow. With the creation of lock based engines, even The Sky Barrons of The Twelve Skies have an extreme interest in acquiring these magnificent creations. Many fear the power of the keys and some have even developed a habit of wearing keys in full View as a method of intimidation. Some even consider it necessary to wear ordinary keys as a bluff in hopes that it will protect them from unnecessary fights. With all this demand weighing down on them, key makers have a distinctive problem in meeting it with their supply. Even artificial Keys take considerable amounts of time to create due to their complexity. They are believed to be in abundance within the blue cities, if you are brave or stupid enough to venture Into the depths where they are kept.
He clutched the key in hand and asked it to grace him with its phenomenal power. The key responded, glowing a vibrant red and manifesting a mote of hot white light before him. He reached out and held the mote. He sought to change it, to shape it into something else, a hammer, a rifle...
"No," the key said in a low and dominant tone. "...a spear."
The mote elongated, sharpening at its tip, and awaiting him to throw it at his target. He did so with ease, the weightless light shot with surprising speed at the airship, teaing a hole in the hull...
Attunement
Locks and Lock Engines
Aesthetics
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At first when I read the quote I was thinking, "OK, this is kind of mysterious. Interesting." Then when I started reading on, "Attunement," the realization hit me and made me go, "Oh! He was attuning to the key!" Brilliant move there. Although, I do have a couple suggestions that could be touched on. First,
This sentence under, "Perceptions," can use commas to make the reading more negligible. I'd also recommend just general spellchecking the article because there are some areas that could use editing (too small for me to use space to mention here). Second, I'm noticing a gap in space between, "Impact," and, "How do they work?" I'm unsure if this is just a side effect of some BBC commands, but if you're able, you have plenty of room for another paragraph of exposition there!Ohhhh dear. My friend I'm afraid my proofread did not save. I distinctly remember adding those commas. Oof. so sorry. let me fix this nonsense. mobile is no fun lol on the other note thanks for the praise. I've had alot of issues with the keys and reworked em numerous times since i had the idea. I'm glad you enjoyed what it has become. :)