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The Father of Pearls

I'm not going anywhere...

I... I can't feel my legs. Is that bad? Am I not worthy? It won't be long now. I've waited long enough, ever since he came on a wave that flooded the city. "We were always part of the ocean," He said. "It was only fair."
He is The Father of Pearls. He paraded down the streets in the company of monsters, the children of the black sea. He flew open the doors of the old church. It sat vacant, condemned for decades. To my surprise, there were just as many cheers as there were tears. I never knew so many of the failthful lived among us.
I can't speak all of a sudden, a pain in my gut causes me to writhe as my body changes. I'm alone, laying flat on my back on the reef. I'm surrounded by the crashing waves. The sky is dark, and grows darker as my body tears and stretches. I hear someone behind me.
No, I think, there's no way he actually came.I turn to see him, hoping my eyes have yet to fail me. The man was tall, clean, and surprisingly young. His well kept is dark, matching his tan skin and equally dark eyes.
He wears a black robe, as always. He inches towards me and I prepare for the look of disgust, or maybe disappointment. I find neither. He stares at my transformation with concern, empathy.
He gently grabs my face and turns it so our eyes can meet, "I'm here."
I sat up, doing everything I could to resist the pain. I try to speak, but my mouth is gone. I want to apologize for taking up his time.
He kneels to the ground, puts his hand on my newly formed skin, and he gives me a smile. He sits on the rocky ground of the reef, just a foot away from me. The waves crash around us, the storms growing more violent than ever.
"I'm here for you," he says. He takes a deep breath of ocean air, "I'm not going anywhere. No one should have to do this alone."
The Father of Pearls is a man named Victor Bondar, the leader of The Order of The Black Sea and its most zealous member. While there are many horrifying tales of brutality on the part of the cult, Victor is progressive, and helped shape The Commonwealth of Alternative Religion .   He is not known for his zeal, though he has plenty to spare. He is not known for harpooning heretics like many of his predecessors, though these heinous acts are not beneath him. In reality, he is most known for his kindness.   The cult is well known for its assortment of monsters, creatures that used to be human. When They volunteer, they are allowed to gaze upon The Idol of Foam. If chosen, they seclude themselves on the reef outside of the cult's base of operations. The Father of Pearls stays with them. Every single one of them will enjoy his encouragement and moral support during their painful transformation.
   

A Brief History

Victor was born in Ukraine nearly 200 years ago. His father was a sailor and a member of The Order of The Black Sea. Victor joined the order when he became of age, rising steadily through the ranks until he became the de facto leader sometime in the 1940s.     Not much is known about the time before he was the leader. Following a hunch, it was Victor who found the idol of foam hidden beneath Venice. The idol was essential for the cult's survival, being the only true connection to the god they worship.     Victor would be a primary influence in the Commonwealth of alternative religion. He slowly shifted the direction of the cult. One example being the creatures he commands. The order was one of the first cults to actively use eldritch creatures in their holy wars. Victor shifted this transformation away from war and towards enlightenment.

Appearance

Unlike the leaders before him, Victor underwent a transformation himself. His body has been mutated in many ways. As such, he always wears thick black and navy robes to cover the last palatable mutations.     When wearing the robes, he looks like a normal human being. He is clean, charismatic, and intelligent. Something those who meet him often struggle with is how empathetic he is. Even members of the web are surprised when they encounter the cult and are invited to dine with him as opposed to being sacrificed.     The mutations that he hides include hoofed feet, patches of scales along his arms, and a third appendage sprouting from his upper back. This appendage is a flashy tendril that he has used in combat many times.
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Jul 6, 2020 18:12

"His well kept is dark" probably needs a noun.   " to cover the last palatable mutations." probably should be "least"... right?   I wonder, and some other members of the cult may wonder, just how committed he is to the cause? does he care more for the cult's agenda, or the comfort of it's members? Does he care to spread the word or is he content to bow out and let other factions take power for the sake of peace?   come to think of it, I don't think I know any of this cult's teachings, other than an implication that being transformed into a sea abomination is supposed to be a great honor.   I wonder if he takes off his cloak and uses his extra limb to help around the house. Maybe he's got a cookie recipe that he makes whenever visitors from out of town come...

Jul 6, 2020 18:33 by R. Dylon Elder

Lollll ill fix those typos. The biggest problem, I spose its an issue, is that in his mind there isn't a choice. The agenda of the cult and their confort don't really conflict with each other.   Now to be fair, I have no idea what their agenda is. This be the newest cult and I havnt expanded on them, but I know that much. Man having that limb would make vacuming so easy. Maybe not cookies though... fish sticks.

Jul 6, 2020 18:23 by Stormbril

The intro prose is really interesting, it drew me in right away!  

His well kept is dark, matching his tan skin and equally dark eyes.
.   His well kept... what? Not sure if this is just a saying I don't understand, or if a word is missing!   I really really liked this article. I like that Victor is known for his kindness, and I love how that's shown in the intro/ending prose on this article. Fantastic stuff Dylon!

Jul 6, 2020 18:34 by R. Dylon Elder

Thank you very much storm. I'll fix those typos. They slipped by lol I'm glad you like him. Hes been fun to write with thus far.

Jul 7, 2020 00:20 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

I'm surprised how kind he seems. For some reason, I feel like this makes him more sinister? Not sure why.   Father of Pearls is a great name, by the way.

Emy x
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Jul 7, 2020 22:55 by Grace Gittel Lewis

A gripping and weirdly touching intro!  

His well kept is dark, matching his tan skin and equally dark eyes.
His well kept what?  
...to cover the last palatable mutations.
Least?   And an equally nice closing quote! I like this guy, seems you've hit upon his charisma fairly well through just a few lines!

Jul 7, 2020 23:37 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks so much! Yeah I forgot to fix those yesterday. May as well just fix em now XD I'm glad you enjoyed the quote. I enjoyed writing it. May expand soon.

Jul 8, 2020 20:46 by Jacob Billings

"We were always part of the ocean," He said. "It was only fair."
  I can't tell if you are using "He" as a name or if you just accidentally capitalized it. In any case, pronouns are only capitalized if beginning a sentence, which it isn't, or if they are actually proper nouns.  
"I'm here for you," he says. He takes a deep breath of ocean air, "I'm not going anywhere. No one should have to do this alone."
  You switched capitalization here. Also, the comma after "ocean air" could/should be a period as you aren't using it as a dialogue tag and, as it's not an interjection, it suggests some odd connections.   You are so close to an even sidebar. You should see if there are sentences you can extend or add so that it's a bit closer to even since the history expands past it a bit.   An interesting character, using a fun mix of kindness and horror. The opening quotes add a good sense of theme,as always, and the rest of

Jul 8, 2020 20:47 by Jacob Billings

Must have clicked reply on accident. "establish the rest of the article" is what I was planning on saying.

Jul 8, 2020 21:00 by R. Dylon Elder

Thank you once again! I'll fix those. I wrote that in a bit of frenzy and since I'm writing at work alot its all on mobile. editing is a nightmare on mobile. I'll fix it.   I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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