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Enervated Ivy

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Author's Notes

This article was written for the Peculiar Plants World Anvil Challenge of March 2021. This article was a doozy to write. There were a lot of ideas that I had that didn't make the cut, but I like the final concept. The writing and design may not be the best I've ever written, so I'm open to suggestions on how to improve. It's been a while since I've had the time to dedicate to writing a full article like this. Let me know your thoughts in the comments and, if you liked it, consider leaving a like for the Peculiar Plants challenge shortlist!  

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Mar 11, 2021 22:06

This article really has a scientific feel to it and is quite detailed. It seems you really put some thought into it! My remarks would only be with the layout. I think the background and main text combination is not the easiest to read. Also the quotes with the same background as the main seem a bit strange. Otherwise it's a well done breaking of the text.

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Mar 12, 2021 00:52

Really interesting species. The symbiosis with the fungi is nice touch. Small nitpick, but pollen is produced in flowers by the stamen, the stigma is the female part of the flower, which pollen lands on.

Mar 12, 2021 00:57 by Jacob Billings

Ooh. Thanks for that catch. It's been a while since I've been in a biology class that focused on microbiology in flowers.

Mar 12, 2021 01:21 by R. Dylon Elder

Ooo first off, I love the idea that a plant could get so out of control in growth that it cant be brought back under control. That's a nice little opening there and it really shows just how dangerous it can be. Oooof and later in vineyard if nightmares, even trying to contain such large areas could release and spread pollen. This is a well evolved plant.     Idk if it be a typo but this "Enervated ivy often considered..." I think you left out an "is"   The descriptio. If the plant and all its features is quite nice. Well written and I can picture it clearly. Very nice. I also like the added images and quotes. I think its intriguing how it doesnt require fertilization to produce the pollen. That's a nice little detail and makes it kinda scary.   Oooo now this is my favorite bit, the drugs the plant produces. I like how it's more than just sedatives but also illegal drugs which opens up the Avenue for some crazy professions. I mean... I hope they have health insurance, lol.     Well done good sir, and a fine addition to your world. I would hate to actually come across it though. I think the most interesting thing is how believable it is I could see this being a thing. There are plants that have to watched for out there and some are actively eliminated too. Well done.

Mar 12, 2021 01:49 by Jacob Billings

Ooh! Thanks so much for the comment and kind words. I'm glad it has a semi-eerie, dangerous feeling to it. And yes. It is one heck of a well-evolved plant. Without modern gas masks, boy would it be difficult to deal with. Even with the ability to control the air, what are you supposed to do when you release such a large quantity of pollen that can float for miles on a light breeze? You either let it take a contained area or risk pouring so much pollen into the air that the entire world gets coated.   Yeah. That was just a bit of a typo. Whoops.   I'm glad you enjoy all of the more specific details of the species. It's always fun to include to bring everything alive. Thanks for taking the time to read and like it! I really appreciate it.

Mar 13, 2021 07:30 by Andrew Booth

Oooo I love this. Very detailed which makes my science brain happy, and nicely tied into a purpose within the world, which makes my writing brain happy. And despite the fact that it's quite long, nice and easy to read!

Mar 17, 2021 07:01 by Wendy Vlemings (Rynn19)

Very interesting and scary plant Jacob! I like how it can't be fully eradicated, and that you included the illegal drugs made from it.

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Mar 17, 2021 19:29 by Jacob Billings

Thank you so much, I really appreciate you taking the time to look through it. Hit me up if you get an article out for the challenge!

Mar 17, 2021 14:33 by TC

Gosh the detail of this article is mind blowing! That Vineyard of Nightmares sounds like a, well, nightmare. Joke aside I love the visual of the overgrown and poisonous castle. The sections on uses is also very interesting to read, nice work!!

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Mar 17, 2021 19:25 by Jacob Billings

Aww. Thank you so much! The kind words are really appreciated.

Mar 23, 2021 01:03 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

I think you've done a really great job with the detail in this article! I really like the symbiotic relationship the ivy has with fungi, in particular. :D I also like that most of the interest is in the flower/pollen, and the actual vine of the ivy is similar to other species of ivy in your world. The pollen scares me a little. o.o

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Mar 23, 2021 01:37 by Jacob Billings

Thanks for checking it out! I really appreciate it :) I'll be checking your article out the first opportunity I get!

Mar 27, 2021 07:45 by Diane Morrison

Very thorough! Good work!

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Apr 13, 2021 07:32 by Amélie I. S. Debruyne

Very interesting article and great plant! The Vineyard of Nightmare is a really nice take on sleeping beauty's castle :D I like the relationship with the fungi It's horrifying that the nearby towns also get regularly exposed to the pollen. Is there a reason why the ivy hasn't propagated to those towns yet?   A few notes I took while reading:   "even via the use of Resonance" you could add a tooltip here to explain what it is.   I found the pollen being single chain polymer slightly weird because that would mean it contains all the DNA in just one chain + replication materials and energy to replicate for once it goes on the ground…That must really be an enormous chain… Is it linear? I got the idea it was so as to be more volatile, but maybe you could say it's mostly planar so as to be lifted by the air flow? With the DNA itself forming the plain and the replication complexes and energy on top and moving along the plain to reach the right genes.   Oh, and I forgot that the pollen must also have some chemicals to induce the sleeping effect in people. "and incorporating the extracted chemicals with stimulants" that means that those chemicals must be present in high enough quantity too.   I imagine that one of the reasons the content of the soil is so important is the fact that the content of the pollen is so minimal. If anything it needs is missing from the it can't do anything but die.   "As a result, enervated ivy, while local to the tropics, doesn't have any particular habitat needs." Can it also stand ice? I don't imagine that's something it encounters very often in the tropics :D   Talking about a strand of an animal species sounds strange… I know we talk about strand of bacteria, not sure about fungi, but for animal you wouldn't. You can say races if it's genetically distinct groups of animals but that can still reproduce together within the wider species group.   Anyway, I really like the idea and your attempt to explain the volatility of the pollen and the rapid propagation of the ivy. And that horrible castle :D And nice layout of the article and illustration of the flower too!

Apr 14, 2021 02:22 by Jacob Billings

Wow! Thanks for the comment; I'm sorry to say I don't really have the time to address the errors in the article nor give you a proper thank you by looking deeper into your article at this point, but your feedback is extremely appreciated.   The propagation of the plant requires a few specific things to happen and, since the Vineyard of Nightmares is heavily quarantines, the amounts of pollen released are in a quantity wherein they are able to impact the population but are unable to properly begin reproducing.   Whoops. I should have actually just linked the Resonance article so that automatic tooltip, at the very least, hinted at the subject. I'll see about getting that updated.   That's a bit of a tough one to answer. Luckily, I neglected to use strong wording so I can find ways to rationalize my lack of knowledge on the specific evolutionary processes. If I had to wager a guess as to the best solution, I'd say the low atomic density is a result of increased distance in the DNA, which is the primary base of the polymer chain. Conversely, the energy needs are met by the environment and reproduction function is based upon the specialization of the cells upon immediate collection of energy, allowing for exponential growth in the initial stages. No idea if that makes sense or conflicts with anything since I've not looked into the deep specifics of microbiology nor any lore conflicts.   I'd probably assume the few specialized cells mentioned above that are required for the reproduction of the plant would be the main producer of the effect, only located on the pollen and young seedling for the first day or so. While it would be in a relatively low concentration per pollen polymer, the number of pollen polymers would lead to a high enough concentration for extraction to be possible. Again, no idea if that helps.   Indeed; also because it has such a high reproduction and growth rate, so the contents of the soil are really important. I probably included something in the article somewhere?   Technically, yes. While this makes virtually no sense scientifically, so long as the plant can still gather the nutrients from the soil it would be able to last the winter. There would be an increased reliance upon the soil making it even more difficult for propagation, hence the reason it's mostly found in the tropics. That line was originally included because the Vineyard of Nightmares was originally in the mountains not on the shore.   You know. That does make sense, now that you mention it. Strand just sounded correct. I probably should use species variants for animals since it suggests greater special differences than the minor variations in strands of bacteria.   Thanks, I appreciate the praise! Your article, since I won't get a comment there in a reasonable amount of time, was also really well designed and formatted. Well deserving of the astonishing 85+ likes.

Apr 15, 2021 19:09 by Amélie I. S. Debruyne

No problem, thanks for reading my article :D

Apr 13, 2021 19:51 by Michael Chandra

Neat and scary! And while I perfectly understand using it for drugs, my first thought was using it for biological warfare: Secretly cultivate in enemy lands, then during a windy period, feed them enough to go crazy with the spores and watch entire cities go down.


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Apr 14, 2021 02:01 by Jacob Billings

Thanks, for both the comment, praise, and reading! I didn't really think about biological warfare, however, it'd only ever be used by what would boil down to high-risk/suicide bombers that were members of criminal organizations as it's been banned worldwide. But that would be terrifying; especially if someone managed to instead transfer the pollen to explosive devices all released in a single city simultaneous.

Apr 14, 2021 08:18 by Michael Chandra

Oh my, if the pollen remains active instead of going inert, that'd definitely work...


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Apr 16, 2021 22:23 by Mark Laybolt

Hey Jacob!   You've done a wonderful job laying out and describing your plant. You have an amazing sense for how to vary your layout, and I like your colour palette. I'm a big fan of your inclusion of various scientific bits throughout such as taxonomy and knowing that polymer chains can be lightweight. I don't really have any suggestions for 'improvements' other than I like more images but that's a really subjective matter. Great work!