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Favor’s Elegy

By: ???
The wind has never carried loyalty
Fate’s verdict impartial to royalty
Though many try to stack destiny’s deck
They will find all outcomes lead them to wreck
Unlike you, death can’t lose the waiting game
Doom grins in skulls of jovial green flame
Worship or wither in ancient wastelands
Mangled by fangs of abyssal war bands
Plague and famine test a soul’s true resolve
Succumb to decay or slay and absolve
Pride, deadly bane of thieves in the night
Yet kings must fear both modesty and smite
Denounce the deserting wind of the dunes
The true name renounced by words but not runes
Unravel chains of infested grape vines
Hope rediscovered in withered red wines

"If I wrote six of the poems it begs the question, who wrote the seventh? Well, I’ll let you have the satisfaction of figuring that out. I’ll leave this hint to guide you towards the answer: compare the meter of the poems. Wizards have always written in trochaic octameter. It sets us apart from the gypsies trying to sell you a potion that gives you the ability to see new colors. Obviously, they are frauds; just to clarify, I have created potions that give the ability to witness new colors. Royalty have always written in iambic pentameter; well, do you know who else just so happens to write in iambic pentameter? Dragons. Yea, the nobility is pretty egotistical to separate themselves from the common-folk by comparing their prose to that of dragons (there is nothing wrong with being prideful; there is something wrong with being prideful when you are undeserving)." - Curiosity


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Aug 19, 2018 16:50

I will admit that the article is very well written but some of the lore here is a little confusing.

Aug 19, 2018 17:23 by Elliott Hay

There is a lot of context to the poem. The poem is one of the Seven Lights. If you check out the category of the Seven Lights I hope it will make more sense. You can take a look at the other poems to give some context.

Aug 20, 2018 01:59 by EMBlevins

Fantastic poem, very well written. I especially like the quote and art as well, really makes me want to dig into more of your articles to better understand everything that is being referenced.

Aug 20, 2018 17:44 by Nichole Roach

I'm not much of one for poetry, but it does seem a bit confusing. It seems more like a collection of proverbs. I'll have to check out the other poems and lore to make more sense of it.

Aug 22, 2018 11:34

It's quite a long and well rhymed poetry, but it is indeed a bit confusing at first to me. Personally, I found it hard to catch the general idea, especially with all 16 not so short lines going one after another. I'd suggest splitting them in, for example, four or two parts with a blank line between them just to make it easier to read, if the poem can be divided into smaller parts. And though I can't really judge from the lore perspective the poem seems to heavy rely on, great job anyway!