Ellen Allen's Last Straw

Ellen Allen served as the Living Village Elder for 35 years, until her death in 2005 at the age of 101. As the end of the 20th century approached and heralded a new millenium, tensions rose in the village until finally, Ellen Allen snapped and murdered her fear-mongering neighbor, Chad Brian Miller, IV.

The Conflict

Prelude

In the late 90s, as the turn of the millenium approached, concerns around the village began to arise. Some remembered the H1N1 Influenza Pandemic of 1918-1919, and nearly everyone remembered the Storm of '74.

These events sent waves of burdened souls into the village. It created a strain on their resources and settled hardhip on the shoulders of every villager, living or dead. Still as time passed, the dead worked through their lingering troubles and passed beyond, leaving the village to slowly recover from the strain. The villagers were concerned that Y2K hysteria would send people over the edge, and the resulting chaos -- whether war, mass suicides from cult beliefs, disease, or alien invasion -- would spawn another heavy influx of troubled souls.

Seeing an opportunity to sieze the percieved power of popular opinion, Chad attempted to sway the living villagers against the already troubled dead. He hijacked a village meeting which had been scheduled to assure the villagers that there was no reason to panic, and attempted to use fear-mongering and xenophobia to rally the living to his cause.

His attempt was as impotent as he was, and it garnered him a lot of ill feeling from a large portion of the village. But none more than Ellen Allen. As the next several years passed, he would try again and again to turn the living villagers against the dead, and time and again he failed.

Deployment

After years of putting up with Chad's assanine attempts at self-aggrandizement at the expsense of her friends and neighbors, Ellen had finally had enough. In a 'gesture of peace and forgiveness,' Ellen went to Chad and delivered a tin of homemade macarons filled with chocolate-almond-cyanide ganache.

The Engagement

Together, they sat on the cobbled patio behind Chad's house. They sipped the awful tea that Chad made to go with the cookies. It was bitter as he'd let the water boil. He offered her not so much as a cube of sugar to sweeten it, but the old woman did not complain. She simply sipped, then ate a cookie, and sipped some more.

Sip by sip, cookie by cookie, bite by bite she matched Chad's consumption.

Breath by breath, wheeze by wheeze, side by side, they died.

Conflict Type
Covert Operation

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Jul 5, 2024 20:45 by Carolyn McBride

Bitter tea? They poisoned each other! Brilliant! Loved this piece.

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Jul 6, 2024 01:50 by Haly the Moonlight Bard

I love, love, love that that's where your mind went! LOL! But alas, no, he's just shit at making tea and didn't offer her so much as a lump of sugar for it. He just assumed that an old woman would want tea to go with her cookies, and so he .....(trigger warning, food abuse).... He boiled the water.

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Jul 6, 2024 21:29 by Carolyn McBride

Ruining tea should be a crime. Although he DID pay for said food-crime...

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Jul 7, 2024 14:10 by Haly the Moonlight Bard

It's why she didn't complain, LOL! She already knew she was having the 'last word,' no matter what. If the best revenge is a life well-lived, then living to the age of 101 and going out on your own terms is exactly what I would call winning!

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Aug 4, 2024 17:50 by rugrat0ne

What a way to end things. If I get to pick my battles in my twilight years, this might be how I'd go.

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Aug 4, 2024 19:22 by Haly the Moonlight Bard

Let's just say I've entered that exclusive club of writers who need to make sure their legal advisor knows that they're an author. Just to explain the browser history and research chats that have been logged on my laptop and in my Microsoft account.

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Aug 9, 2024 19:18

Very funny. Who hasn't had a neighbor they would do almost anything to get rid of?

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Aug 10, 2024 23:01 by Haly the Moonlight Bard

Her ashes rest in the Catacomb Caves in an urn engraved "Ellen Allen lived and died in service to the Village of Avalon."

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Aug 21, 2024 18:50

Thank you for broadening my mind that conflicts are not just massive wars fought by various nations but can also be smaller and still essential to people!

Aug 24, 2024 15:38 by Haly the Moonlight Bard

I think "military" in the template title is misleading, and that it should just be "conflict," and one of these days I'll get around to mentioning that. I don't think it's a big enough change to warrant the whole process of a suggestion.   I love the non-traditional use of a template and the creative interpretation of a prompt, and since I sponsored this one, I wanted to give a good example of both of those. A lot of people get scared of the conflict prompts because maybe conflict is something they're writing to escape from, or lots of other reasons. Sometimes we just don't see the options right in front of us, I have that "why didn't I think of that?" moment almost every single day, LOL!   I write a newsletter on Substack about this sort of thing, breaking down world-building techniques with real examples (good and bad) from popular media, examples of how I use the techniques in my own writing and world-building, and even an Ask the Bard column every Wednesday. If you're interested, you can subscribe for free at the link in my signature!!!

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Aug 26, 2024 18:48

You definitely opened my eyes to the possibilities with your article. And I fully agree that the template title would be better if it were just "conflict". I always struggle to come up with military conflicts during Summer Camps. That's why it is one of my focus during the reading challenge. And I'm so happy that I ran into yours. If you finally end up making a suggestion, please let me know. I have a lot of points to throw at it.   I've subscribed to your newsletter. I can't promise I'll be better at world-building even after reading all your articles. But I can promise that I'll try. :)

Aug 26, 2024 22:14 by Haly the Moonlight Bard

The best thing about creative arts -- writing, drawing, dancing, music -- is that the more you do it, the better you get. The only way to get better is to do it bad, and then eventually less bad.

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Aug 30, 2024 18:08 by Gilly-May Hartill

Excellent article!   Just to let you know, I loved it so much that I've featured it in my Summer Camp Reading challenge:  

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Aug 31, 2024 17:25 by Haly the Moonlight Bard

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much, Gilly-May, I'm super pleased you enjoyed it. <3

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