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Dec 20, 2020 09:14

I really, really enjoy the trope you've subverted here. In so many fantasy settings, it's always the "barbarians" who scoffs at civilization for being weak and soft (thanks to Conan, probably). But yeah, that shit ain't easy - having the types who'd typically be scoffing along with Conan turn the complete opposte reaction it just *great* :D


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Dec 20, 2020 22:12 by Sloqush

Given that subverting tropes -and throwing them in the blender- is a key pillar of Cenorad, I am very happy to hear that Q :D

Dec 20, 2020 22:31 by Morgan Biscup

That opening quote really sets the tone for this article. What a powerful introduction to the Eddali.   I will also admit, having recently rewatched the Netflix Witcher series, it reminds me a bit of Queen Calanthe... Who would likely be more comfortable leading a pack of Eddali now that I think about it.   The whole article was a wonderful read. I can tell the thought you put into these people and it comes through beautifully throughout. Very well done.

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Dec 21, 2020 06:57 by Sloqush

Hey SolarCat, thank you for all the praise for the article and I am thrilled to hear that enjoyed reading it :D   Also, I can certainly see Queen Calanthe as a pack leader, though then she likely couldn't be "friends" with Geralt anyone given that the Eddali certainly would be classified as monsters in the Witcher universe :p

Dec 21, 2020 13:38 by Morgan Biscup

Honestly she would probably consider that a bonus.

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Dec 21, 2020 14:30 by Sloqush

That's certainly true, I forgot just how much she "likes" Geralt :D   Also, now that I think about it if her kingdom was an Eddali pack-nation Nilfguard would likely have a very VERY bad day the moment they decided to attack it.

Dec 21, 2020 15:49 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

This is such a fascinating species. I love the fact their culture is basically a weird reinterpretation of others' cultures. The thing about violins often being called 'violence' tickled me. :)

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Dec 22, 2020 09:21 by Sloqush

Hey Emy, happy to hear that you liked the article and the "violin" joke :D   Fun Fact; in my head, I summarized the whole concept of the Eddali somewhat like this: "Wolf-Men trying to LARP as ancient Romans but all they have is a grade school Latin book that has been google translated to hell and back."

Dec 22, 2020 11:00 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Yes. Perfect.

Emy x
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Dec 27, 2020 22:47

This is a great twist on barbarianism and Cargo cults. Well thought out and fascinating creatures and culture mish-mash. I can just see someone sent as "embassy" to a tribe and having to fight their way up the tribe to determine what status the ambassador should have.

Dec 31, 2020 20:55 by Sloqush

Yeah Eddali "diplomacy" if we wanna call it like that, is certainly something special :D

Dec 31, 2020 13:53 by Michael Chandra

These seem like fun to work with, or fight alongside of! Just gotta make sure you understand their culture well enough to not piss them off first. o,o


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