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Sep 3, 2020 22:05 by Morgan Biscup

allowing them to unleash a true hailstorm of candy-flavored destruction
  And with that, I am now imagining these sorcerers as toddlers. Haha!   I love these! And also the little bits of flavor and worldbuilding peppered throughout. CTall as a sorcerer" is especially great!

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Sep 3, 2020 22:22 by Sloqush

Great to hear that :D   Funnily enough, imagining them as toddlers is actually not that far from the truth, as Sycian Sorcerers are essentially the "Magical Girls" of my world.   Though they are far less the Sailor Moon type of Magical Girl and more the Puella Magi Madoka Magica type if you get my drift.

Nov 24, 2020 10:31

Phrases such as "PACT OF PUDDING" and "MAXIMISE SUGAR" are big-strong and I love it. This article is fun and informative in all the best ways. You did a great job, Sloqush.

Nov 24, 2020 16:20 by Sloqush

It certainly was a fun article to write, so I am glad to hear that you enjoyed reading it :D

Nov 28, 2020 06:19 by Sailing Ocelot

I came here, captivated from the pudding image. I leave here, disturbed. Suspicious of my own sweet tooth. Fantastic ideas and very well written!

~~~~~~~~ SailingOcelot
Apr 25, 2021 10:06 by Sloqush

Thank you very much :D

Apr 13, 2021 02:55 by O4

Fascinating magic system! As usual, I love all the names you gave to each section and the unrelenting hailstorm of puns that bombarded me. You definitely have your own voice and character you give to your articles.   I have a clear vision of how this system works. The idea of sugar-induced magic is so cool. You described its applications in great detail.   The only thing I would like to see is at least one example of how candy battles look like. A quote/sidebar section about a specific spell could go a long way in making the magic feel real.   But yeah, awesome article!


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Apr 25, 2021 10:05 by Sloqush

Hey rikia, I am very happy to hear that you liked this bizarre and pun-riddled magic system :D   I also just now added some example spells to the sidebar, so you can enjoy the magic in all its sugary glory ^_^   Just please don't eat anything while reading them because they are some high-octane nausea fuel if I say so myself.

Apr 28, 2021 21:21 by O4

I love the spells! You really make good use of the sweetness-factor. "The Last Soufflé" is my personal favorite


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Apr 27, 2021 17:46 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Sugar slut made me choke on my tea.   This is such a unique and weirdly terrifying school of magic. I can almost smell the sugar rolling off my screen. You have such a great imagination! :D <3

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Apr 28, 2021 19:49 by Sloqush

Oh no, I hope you could recover from this tea-flavored attack, Emy D:   If it helps I can tell you that I completely forgot that I put that nickname in the article, so when I read your comment I was also attacked by my beverage of choice ^_^   On another note, it makes me very happy to hear that you liked the weird magic system that my brain cooked up this time :D

Jun 21, 2021 17:55 by Kaleidechse

Love it! ^^ The idea of candy-based magic is awesome already, but all the disturbing details make it perfect! Brrr, the Sortilege Hall of Fame is really terrifying... Also, the fact that the article begins and ends with a quote from a Lutescent Lady is very neat - I like how it all comes full circle with explaining their origin!


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Jun 21, 2021 19:29 by Sloqush

Very happy to hear that, the article was very fun to write (mostly because of all those sugar-puns :D) so it is great that you had fun reading it ^_^   Also thank you for all the comments you left on my other articles it is very much appreciated :D

Jun 22, 2021 10:27 by Kaleidechse

Anytime! ^^ Thank you for writing this wonderfully weird stuff!


Creator of the Kaleidoscope System and the planet Miragia.
Jun 22, 2021 15:21 by Sloqush

You're welcome :D