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Feb 12, 2021 23:48 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

What an amazing story - she was a really interesting character, for sure. The idea that she might have survived her encounter with the volcano is actually kind of creepy, though.   I love the quotes from her. They're really full of a lot of personality! :D

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Feb 13, 2021 11:22 by Sloqush

Given that I feel that writing characters is actually a weakpoint of me, it makes me very happy to hear that Emy :D   And yes Zahra's potential survival is certainly unnerving...though likely not as unnerving as the thing she would turn into should she have reached her "hatching age".

Feb 13, 2021 18:17 by Morgan Biscup

I can absolutely see why she would have developed a cult. I love this character, and how you brought her to life.

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Feb 13, 2021 20:55 by Sloqush

Happy to hear that Solar :D

Feb 15, 2021 00:11 by Michael Chandra

Oh my. O_O I'm not sure whether I should hope or fear for her survival.


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Feb 15, 2021 08:55 by Sloqush

Probably a bit of both ^_^   Well unless you are a volcano...then you should be very afraid :p

Jul 19, 2021 21:42 by Amélie I. S. Debruyne

What did this poor volcano every did to the Mists? XD   Great story! I guess that even if she survived the volcano, she would be beyond 6,666 days old by now and would have joined the Mists.

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