Orris
The First 500 Years - From camp to colony to free city
Demographics
The population are predominantly Mor, reflecting the town’s origin, though when compared to their cousins it is clear that there is a streak of Taru in their ancestry reflecting interbreeding in the early years of the settlement. Other races from elsewhere in Tarusia and further abroad are represented in the trading and mercantile classes and areas of the town reflecting its long history as centre of trade for the surrounding areas.You'll find all sorts of folk here, but mostly we all stick to our own. Mixing for business is fine - we're all here for business, but personal gets tricky. Each to their own way and don't force on others - it works for us... mostly.
Government
In its days as a part of the Empire, Orris had a council comprising the heads (or nominees) of the main guilds, representatives of the “granted” districts, and movers and shakers who could influence their way onto the council through wealth or usefulness. This was nominally chaired by the Emperor’s representative (often absent except for the oath taking period each winter). Following the Empire’s collapse this council is now lead by a triumvirate who serve overlapping 3 year terms with the senior of these taking a first among equals role.Defences
Initially the settlement was defended by a pallisade but as the town grew, it expanded beyond that and it’s line now forms one of the main roads. With no immediate threat and hopes of expansion the landward side is only defended with bank and ditch. From 1136 there has been a boom across the inner harbour but it has had little use and if called for now many doubt that it would be functional.Industry and Trade
In its early years boat and ship building predominated, though these trades have now left for areas where the timber supply is closer. Fishing remains a major food source but the wider economy and prosperity of Orris is now delivered by trade with the town acting as a major “wholesale” market for marine merchants of the surrounding lands. This position was secured when the Merchant Mages of Naros set up their first branch outside the Sea of Strange Lands here.Guilds and Factions
Architecture
by Ed Andrew
Natural Resources
The once mighty forests were largely felled in the area surrounding Orris in the first few centuries of it's existence. Following the migration of the shipbuilding industry to the east in the town's third century there has been some reforestation but the land is now cultivated. The seas around Orris remain a rich source of fish though this is now less widely eaten than it once was following overfishing of the Taruvian Herring.
I really appreciate the formatting. Great use of the full footer. The article itself is a bit on the dry side and reads a bit like a Wikipedia article. This sentence: The following years saw the currently most out of favour of the emperor's family sent across the seas in early winter to receive the oaths and taxes and return in the spring. makes no sense to me. I'm not sure if it's an unfinished thought or if you changed something in the sentence and missed that two sentences got blended. Either way, I can't figure out what you're trying to say. I would like to see more "life" to the article. What is the day to day life of a citizen in the city? Are there any particularly popular taverns or merchants? See if you can break out of the Wikipedia-styled information dump and breathe some life into it. It's a great start and you have done a lot of great world-building here, just see if you can't make a bit more enticing for an outsider to read.
Thanks for that. The sentence was meant to show that being sent to take Oaths at Orris was a punishment. I'll make that clearer. I love the idea of an random person's daily impression and I'll give that a bit of thought.
Glad to help! Don't take my lukewarm response as meaning the article is bad. It's not. It's just that I'm not personally that keen on fantasy at present, which makes it hard to impress or entice me with fantasy media. But I try to do my best to deliver an honest comment on what I felt while reading the article. Usually that's the best way to tell a writer how the reader felt, rather than offering "This was great!" That doesn't really help anyone improve. ;)