Crescent of Finality
University of Saebia | College of Sugran Studies
Introduction
Crescent of Finality is the Yeamese translation of and name for the sugran generational world-ship Kanshor na Mekketh. The ship is of paramount importance in sugran culture; differing fundamental views regarding the ship led to the political movements that created the three separate sugran nations on Chellok: Torgath, Gurrat, and Kranath. Although most humans on Chellok recognize the name of the ship as the sugrans' former home, few primary sources of information or records of the ship exist and even fewer have been translated into Yeamese. The bulk of human knowledge about the Crescent of Finality comes from the journal of Sonnuk Yaga (? SE - 204 SE), which was recovered during Larta Aquon's famous expedition to Uaba Cave.Journal entries mentioning the Crescent of Finality
First mention of the ship's origin and defining characteristics
UABA CAVE, 14th day of Month 32, 204 SE
...Everything on this moon is still so new that despite the difficulties of life here, I do not long to return to the Cresent. Each of us must deal with the "great expulsion" in our own way, for none of us are ever going to return to her bosom in this life. I found a peace with my new life here upon overhearing an argument between a few elders yesterday during a stroll near the cave entrance. In a tirade, one of them claimed that it was innate sugran perseverance and ingenuity that allowed our ancestors to construct the original kernels of the Kanshor na Mekketh and escape our doomed ancestral homeworld. I did not know this elder's name, nor did I linger to eavesdrop further. Nevertheless, the spirit and vigor in her voice renewed a faith within me, a faith that we were not abandoned here to die, but to once again till soil and grow not only our livelihoods, but a newer and greater chapter in the history of our people. In unbosomed honesty however, I must confess to missing dearly friends and family. I wept last night at the thought of never again seeing the Beilin Saxora and remembering the awe on Uvas' and Duwar's faces while looking at the eternal sky as we traversed the Lanom conduits.1 ...The oldest primary source providing insight into the ship's cultural importance and the psyche of early Chellokan sugrans
UABA CAVE, 20th day of Month 37, 204 SE
... But I like to think that my mind returns to the Crescent not for the past but for the future. Two days ago near the entrance to the cave one of our fellow exiles bore a child, the first sugran born on Pelseketh. How different will life be for this new one from the life all of us have known? I ought to record a few memories of the Crescent for posterity while they are still relatively fresh in my mind. Pelseketh has proven already to be full of surprises. Tomorrow's happenings cannot be known. However, talk of the ship has all but become taboo after the terrible time we have suffered in this wretched cave, but I remain resolved that in better times our descendants will look to what we here now leave behind in order to understand their lives on Pelseketh. I write these words to those yet unbosomed, but I apologize in advance, for how can I possibly hope to succinctly describe the Crescent of Finality, our last hope, our sole home for 68 generations, our grand vessel and protector that carried us and still carries our soipele. Perhaps a story is the best place to start.2Professor Santai Marf's depiction of the basic structure of Crescent of Finality
"Sugrankind has not sailed the stars to step back now." — Terlis Yarand insisted that she be the first to traverse a conduit without an exo-suit. The usual stories always say she stepped into the conduit braver than ever, but in unbosomed honesty I believe she felt fear like any of the others. But her logic triumphed over fear, an example that will serve all of us here on Pelseketh well.
Crescent of Finality (Kanshor na Mekketh)
General characteristics (estimated)
Type: Composite fleet dynamically tethered via Lanom conduits
Mass (total): 10.631 quintillion kgs
Diameter: 1.192 million km (fleet average) / 7.109 million km (magnetosphere) / 2,268 km (core)
Ships tethered: 5,828
Propulsion: 10,193 x Oso-pattern repulsor engines
Speed: 180.4 million km/hr (16.7% the speed of light)
Range: Unlimited distance; 15-16 Sekoran years
Lanom Conduits
Lanom conduits are assumed to be an advanced "hard-light" technology used by the sugran to link individual sections and ships of their generational world-ship together. The sugrans originally developed the conduit technology to prevent collisions during refueling and resupplying between early space-faring vessels. They refined and perfected the technology over generations of space travel into the "hard," energy-generating tether that makes the Crescent, essentially a sailing solar system, possible.Beilin Saxora
'Threnody of Stone'This central core of the Crescent of Finality is assumed to be a multi-layered structure of concentric spheres surrounding a mass of collected asteroids. The fleet's center of gravity shifts between layers as the individual sections or ships tethered to the core revolve around it. As the Lanom conduits move through the layers of the core and across its surfaces, the Crescent generates and distributes energy throughout the fleet.
I like the journal entries to tell the story! And the extra follow request worked into that sidebar. The Journal entry titles might be better as descriptive and the date/journal entry stamp below the descriptive title. I think that might improve readability. I like the size of the paragraphs and general layout. One of the middle paragraphs is long but you highlighted key parts.
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Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback, Sage George! Seriously. Those are good points. I had a feeling the article was becoming a wall of text, and was having trouble of thinking of ways to break it up that made sense. The descriptions for the journal entries is a good idea. Haha, that follow request was kind of a joke but fit well I thought.