Commenticius
Secundus Commenticius , The Golden
Divine Symbols & Sigils
The citadel with a cog behind it.
Physical Description
General Physical Condition
His body is plated gold and steel in a mimicry of his former form as a gold dragon. Along his spine and wings are holes and slits where his undead form of white flames can seep out into spines and wing membranes, forming the parts the Mechanites couldn't forge.
Mental characteristics
Personal history
Many ages ago, Commenticius led a group of Mechanites and large amount of Rogue Modrons in an attempt to overthrow Primus, the god of Mechanus. However, the revolt failed, and the Mechanite supporters of Commenticius hid in Mechanus, hoping that Primus wouldn't hunt for them. Many years passed, and it was found out too late that Primus, while not hunting for them himself, sent someone after Commenticius. Primus had made a deal with Stormyddwnr, a very powerful fae lord and a former primordial of chaos, representing the night sky. Primus allowed Stormyddwnr to enter Mechanus and hunt down Commenticius, for the reward of assisting him in his quest to find his partner, Dasg the primordial of chaos representing the Sea. Stormyddwnr hunted Commenticius down, and the two fought for many days, finally ending with Commenticius being dealt a venom filled wound and Stormyddwnr supposedly dying.
Commenticius, seeing he couldn't hide from Primus's wrath in the god's domain, took his supporters and fled across the planescape. Eventually they arrived at the Prime Material Plane, and realized they were unable to leave. Being stuck, Commenticius, disguised as a fellow Mechanite, decided it would be best to stay in the plane, figuring it would be a place Primus would never look for them. They then began building the city of Industriae, Commenticius acquiring the help of a famed military strategist on the plane in fortifying it. Once the city had been built and lifted into the sky, Commenticius insisted on guarding the main source of fuel within the Citadel himself. However, his wound from Stormyddwnr took its tole, as well as the dragon's life. However, due to his dedication to protecting his followers and his city, he became a Hollow Dragon. The Mechanites then created a new body for him, one of gold and steel to replace his golden scales.
This can all be learned via speaking with him.
Divine Classification
False Deity
Alignment
Lawful Neutral
Current Status
Guarding the generator that keeps the city floating
Current Location
Realm
Church/Cult
Age
Ancient
Date of Birth
many years before Indutriae's founding
Date of Death
1 year after Industriae's founding
Circumstances of Death
From a wound done to him by Stormyddwnr, he eventually succumbed to the decay and died guarding the fuel of the city. However, in death he became a Hollow Dragon, and the Mechanites built him a new body made of gold and steel.
Place of Death
The Citadel in Industria
Children
Current Residence
The Citadel
Sex
Male
Eyes
White and pupiless.
Skin Tone/Pigmentation
Gold with steel accents, built around a white flame that holds his bleached bones together.
Aligned Organization
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