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Gregori Darset, The First Poet Laureate of Estoya

I listened to this song over and over again while writing the article and it served as the major inspiration for the story... Though they are cellos and not violins... Enjoy!

  Gregori Darset is considered the first modern bard. He discovered bardic lore and routinely demonstrated exceptional skill in using it. While at first he was an Arcanist, the cold and calculated methods of the Mage towers in Espada didn't quite suit him and he never found a place among the many schools of thought.   Most considered him odd, as he often spent more time studying and practicing art than the arcane. His tutors were certainly amused by his uncanny ability to breathe life into his paintings, often literally, as the watercolor landscapes moved like looking through a window. He furthered his artistic talents as well as his magic to the surprise of his peers and tutors. An Insomniac from a young age, Darset spent his sleepless nights studying allowing him to stay on top of his academic pursuits.

  A talented painter and violinist he also knew fencing, a common fighting style of Espada where the rapier was invented. He usually dressed in efficient clothing always chosen based on where he was or where he was going. With brown hair and green eyes, Darset was always described as stick thin, but healthy and full of life. His lack of sleep always made him look far older than he should, but served him well as it led to his great discovery and skill.

 

The Birth of Bardic Lore


While his early life held little of note, his middle to later years held his greatest achievements. In particular, there was one moment that all bards know by heart: the birth of bardic lore.
  He became a teacher of magic but found the job unfulfilling and often worked on his personal projects instead of furthering his arcane prowess. Many students recall him secluding himself in his office with his violin while his students studied.
One day he emerged from his office early, the look of defeat on his face. A journal entry of one of his students, Farrah Birnahm, described him as having the look of a broken man for days.
She mused about how, despite how odd it sounded, she missed the beautiful music he played and found it quite hard to study without it, but didn't want to ask until she noticed that he "was staring at the violin with a longing in his eyes."

She also mused on how all the students seemed on edge since he stopped playing. It was clear he was working on something and felt as though he had failed. Finally one afternoon she caught the longing stare again. She mustered the courage and asked him,

"I'm sure it wouldn't bother anyone if you played a few notes, professor. I, for one, would love it if you did, this particular chapter is quite dull."
To her and Darset's surprise, cries of agreement echoed throughout the chamber. He picked up the violin and began to play. The students began to relax as the tension in his shoulders loosened. The music began in somber tones and as the composition continued, it grew brighter and happier.

Darset seemed to be entranced and the music began to grow louder. He didn't play loudly, but one could hear every note on the floors above. He began to play in such a way that the students felt overwhelming sensations. Joy grew from sorrow, and each student stared with wonder and admiration. The students looked up and succumbed to the the rising action of the composition as it erupted into a glorious crescendo. It was as if an entire string orchestra could be heard from this one man.

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Dec 6, 2018 15:14

This is an interesting article. I have a few questions, however. You include "Poet Lariot", the common English term is "laureate", is this a typo or a conscious choice? Does Lariot have a specific meaning in your world? Also, you say his gender is "Mal", is that a typo or a specific gender in this world? You put his death in circumstances of birth, was that just misplaced? I really like his life story, however, and how you talk about the "watercolors" flowing from his music. Overall good article, although it could use some editing.

Dec 6, 2018 15:22 by R. Dylon Elder

Did not know about the typos and i shall fix this. various is was an unintended typo that i liked as laureate kept being autocorrected but i have been debating the change as they are very different. Lol, ills witch the birth and death bits too and give a quick edit

Dec 6, 2018 15:22 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks for the comment by the way

Dec 6, 2018 15:44

No problem!

Dec 6, 2018 21:46

An interesting character to say at least, with the backstory being a well-written and beautiful scenario. I can only imagine how insane it must've looked from up close to see him perform! Though, to be fair, while the backstory is all nice, the description of the character feels a bit too small and divided in comparison. I think if you would add some detail to the physical description (or maybe even moved it all to a general description of the person) it may look a lot better too. Maybe make the cover even just a portrait. As for the question, at what age did he exactly die? it isn't directly put in numbers.

Dec 6, 2018 22:07 by R. Dylon Elder

Yeah i agree i gotta specify that he is historical figure and not present day. He died of old age around 67 years old. This was generations before present day though. Tine is broken in this setting so dates are hard and it's an issue i haven't figured out yet.

Dec 6, 2018 22:07 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks for the comment btw :) as always

Dec 6, 2018 22:17

Maybe just note the number in the backstory, that could help

Dec 6, 2018 22:32 by R. Dylon Elder

I will do so and thanks so much. In glad you liked it and glad you enjoyed the writing.

Dec 6, 2018 21:47

It's interesting to see what is essentially the birth of the Bard class, but how old is this character compared to the current date of your setting? :)   I'm also a little uncertain exactly how the magic happened; are you going to be using a soft or a hard magic system? Are you going to go into any more detail exactly how he unlocked bardic magic, or how it works? The idea that an audience is required and their emotional state creates a sort of magical feedback loop that creates effects is a fascinating one and I think it would be amazing to explore. Are you going to do something like that, or more go in a D&D 5th ed directions? :)   Keep on Embering! :D


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Dec 6, 2018 22:05 by R. Dylon Elder

Thanks so much as always and to be honest I really don't like d&d bards and when we first ran with this setting my wife played one the best bards ever by actively refusing to follow the rules of what bards are in the book. The bards are way different here. Lol, so magic in this setting depends on what you are as far as soft or hard it is. The harder it is the more powerful but softer magic with its looser rules isn't going to end the world as it were. A bard is softer than a mage for instance. I do have an article i can link to you describing how the bardic lore works in the present day that stemmed from this characters teaching. Reply and I'll send it to ya if interested. He died around 67 years old, time is broken jn this setting so having dates is an issue i have figures out yet. This was generations ago when this character was around.

Dec 6, 2018 22:18

Sure, shoot me the link!


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