In the year of 1080 I, Isora Mezezi, declare my will to end between the two kingdoms, Etha and Sedun, a war so great and instead I deign to support a peace that may last as long as my dynasty.
Isora Mezezi, queen of Sedun and Khatun of the Kuluij.
Ten thousand eighty years after the king Kilomunj, I, his descendant, Glerigh, king of Etha, hereby seek an end to hostilities with the Ethernian kingdom and instead seek to broker a long and prosperous peace.
Glerigh Jason, king of Etha and greatest living scion of the Jason dynasty- rightful kings of Etha.
Under the roof of Jahamen, the peace between Ethain and Ethernian will be brokered under the following terms:
The kings of Etha will-
Pay to Isora an initial sum of 200,000 silver Zarmos, and in the further five years will send an annual fifth of that amount,
Abandon any claims to islands north of Denk and to Ethernia itself,
Under no circumstances launch attacks on or contest such lands and foresake protection to any subjects or vassals who attempt such actions,
Guarantee the security of the Larundan kings and their land from Ethain invasion as well,
refrain from building any new fortresses in northern Etha,
and Recognize Isora and her descendants as the rightful sovereigns over all of Ethernia and as equals to their own stature.
The Queens of Sedun will-
Withdraw in totality from Etha and abandon all taken holdings,
Never again invade the lands of Etha,
Sponsor no further raids upon Ethain shores,
and No longer encourage border peoples to war with Etha.
In tandem, both kingdoms will-
Return to the other brigands and outlaws that cross their border,
Secure free and open trade with the other,
Assist with arms in times of disaster,
and Regard as kin the other house.
If I or my house house find it relevant to, at some further date, break these terms, then it will be in their rights for the Ethain king to deny my title and disregard their terms.
If my Jason household fails on their terms to uphold this treaty, then the Ethernian would be justified in again moving south with corrective action.
Signed on the twenty third day of the third month of the year 1080 A.K.
Very detailed little piece of your worlds history, with quite a lot of information to chew on. There are a few locations where you have changed your tense, specifically in the Clauses portion. Where there any on either side that opposed this treaty? Were any members of the court against it? What about other nations?
Thank you for the information on my tense usage. I'll look into that. Ethain nobles in the south would have opposed the idea of paying tribute to and recognizing as an equal the Seduni monarchs, although the northern nobles (Whose lands were being ravaged approved). Other Ethernian nobles did oppose it in the sense that they rejected Seduni claims of hegemony.