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Apr 18, 2021 18:50

I can say for a certainty that your art has improved! I love all the added pictures for the immense detail you put into your characters. I will forever be envious. This is such a well thought out character - I love such things, even if there is to be a smattering of shut. ( Or a lot of it, take your pick. ) I've always been far more drawn to erotica with fleshed out worlds and characters than with Mary stu and Gary Sue. It makes it so much more of an enjoyable read.   Now I need to see if you have a similar, or close to it, write up of Pale. It's been so long since I trawled through your things. I must see these fish-people o.o

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Apr 18, 2021 19:50 by Soulwing

I don’t have an article for Pale ‚yet‘, is definitely on my List however ^^   Glad you enjoyed the article, I put many thoughts (and many, many days of private messaging with a bud to flesh out the basics) into her and her history :D I have so much more in notes of her, but these parts are reserved for the novel

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Apr 23, 2021 02:00 by Morgan Biscup

She came out great! I can tell you really love Eva as a character, it shines through your article.   I did spot that one odd sentence, sent you a Discord message, if you want me to help you puzzle out a better wording so it says what you want it to mean let me know, I'm always down for wordsmith ING. <3   Sorry it took me so long to read her article! It was definitely worth the wait.

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Apr 23, 2021 15:12 by Soulwing

You are absolutely right, I definity love my lusty Kobold :D Artwise even to that grade, that she evolved into my comfort character ^^

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