Astronomy Tower of Oephid

The king, with time, grew tired of conquest and left the country to his progeny. Military conquest and exploration became known to him to a point where he would not find interest in either any longer. However, something new piqued his interest; something he could never dream of conquering in his life, but at least enjoy as a spectator: the endless sea of stars. It was a rainy night when he himself came to my house, and asked me about them. For a man known to have destroyed, i sensed a desire to build, to create in his eyes. This became the start of a friendship and a project that would outlast our legacy.
— Oephid Grimmald, Legendary Astronomer

Purpose / Function

In a time it was usually called Raven's Mount, the landmark was a vantage point in high altitude. This was a critical point for any army controlling it; offering a good vision and being part of a beacon relay. About 320 soldiers were garrisoned there at the peak of the war.     After years of war, the fort lost it's critical interest, as the reigning King Gale managed to expand the territory drastically, leaving the necessity of outlook and defence to other settlements closer to the kingdom's borders. Later on, as the fort was used only for maintenance and temporary military shelter, the king pledged to re-purpose the fort as an astronomy tower, which became a world wonder for every tourist considering to visit the country.

Alterations

When King Gale ordered the new project at the fort, the reconstruction took 6 years. Most of the work being revolved around the expansion of the tower, now equipped with an historic telescope and numerous astronomy apparatus.

Architecture

The fort's tower and walls are made of stone which managed to pass the test of time with enough maintenance over the years. Many open-air sections with a roof were made available for the garrison, while more dangerous equipment was kept in closed stone houses near the tower. The heavy presence of stone and frequent rains gave the fort a natural protection against fire.   After the tower's renovation, many 'quality of life' improvements were done inside the tower's quarters to allow scholars to live there. A part of the tower remains made of cut stone, but the extension was made with a special material, rendering the outside opaque, but leaving the inside translucent, which allows the tower's denizens at the top of the tower to view all around them. The top is also equipped with a lightning rod, which is impressive to witness during thunderstorms, and serve as an energy gatherer for some inventions.

History

In the early years of the (writing in progress) conquest, one of King Gale's first objectives was to secure the vantage point known as Raven's Mount, as the high altitude would make a nice point for watching the region and also as a beacon relay if his army ever needed. by keeping and developing this fort,the king managed to have a reliable defence against his enemies of the west, which allowed him to secured his advance to the north. The fort remained a useful landmark during the war.   But as war came to an end, the purpose of the fort became less and less. Now that the kingdom's territory expanded, the fort was less useful as a vantage point, and defence budget was spread more around settlement near the borders. Also, during the year XXX, a plague spread the region, and some soldiers at the garrison died of it. When the plague issue was resolved, some soldiers resigned from working at the fort, pretending they saw their comrades haunting the place. Over time, the fort became a military depot more than anything else, only guarded to secure goods and maintain the fort to a minimum.   It was years later, that King Gale commissioned the astronomer Oephid to make a grand project: to transform the fort into something that would offer vision to something else: the unconquered sea of stars. Before dying, Gale wanted to see the unknown he could never reach, and build something to last the decade of destruction that happened.   Now, the tower is managed by an order of scholar founded by Oephid, and funded by both the government and tourists. A shining beacon of science and wonder, the tower also hides a secret unknown to most: In their death, some of the plagued soldiers who died on reserve felt unfulfilled and remained as ghosts. They now wander the fort, hoping one day to be useful, as they were stripped away from the 'privilege' of dying in combat. This completes the tower with a strong defence mechanism if some ill-intended individuals ever try to destroy the king and astronomer's legacies.

Tourism

Tourism is a frequent thing at the fort as the reputation of the tower being consider a world wonder remains strong. Many scholars, adepts, spellcasters and also people of faith come to discover what lies inside the tower. The society of scholar taking care of the astronomy part of the fort also offers occasional workshops to who may be interested, and can pay for it. Despite the defunct militaristic interest of the fort, about 25 guards remains active in different shifts to offer guided tours of the past's history of this fort, and maintain the beacon and other parts of the fort in shape. Sometimes, garrisons travelling from a town to another also come to rest at the fort and get a moment of respite.   Since the presence of ghosts remains a rumor of interest, some tourists and the tower's personnel often try to stay alert for any kind of physical manifestation, as it has been proved that some of the haunting soldiers, at times, passes their boring immortality reading books and manipulating technological equipment, trying to understand those advanced objects that surrounds them.
Alternative Names
formerly known as Raven's Mount
Type
Observatory / Telescope

Comments

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Jul 4, 2020 12:26

I really like the idea of a king tired of the "normal" things of his profession, and instead wants to dedicate themselves to learn more about what's out there. One thing that was not mentioned was whether the old king got to experience all this before dying. It may make for an interesting sub-section in the sidebar (what he thought of it, what he made of the stars etc,,,)   In regards to formatting, why not use the quote bbcode, which allows you to write the author within the quote? Currently, the author's name is sitting outside of the block and it is a tad disconcerting.   Also, sections of the purpose/function and history repeat themselves. I would personally remove instances of repetition, to avoid making the readers gloss over potentially interesting information (as they may gloss over a section which is repeating in nature).   And finally, one small reading issue: "Military and exploration" does not quite make sense, as military is an adjective, not a noun. Something like "military conquest and exploration" would help to aid in the sentence structure/ease of reading.   All in all, it was a neat idea to read about. I liked the touch of astronomical tourism :P

Jul 6, 2020 01:53 by William Belley

Good point, that would be interesting to know if the King had Time. Im gonna check on those english errors as well and the bbcode. Thanks for the comment and happy summercamp :D

Jul 6, 2020 01:35 by Grace Gittel Lewis

So! First thing, a tip! When you write a quote and want to attribute it to someone, you add the | character after the quote ends, and type in the author! Ex. The sky was beautiful today. | J. L. West  

Military and exploration became known to him to a point he would not find interest in it no more.
The double negatives here don't jive, I'd recommend changing this to;
Military and exploration became known to him to a point where he would not find interest in either any longer.
  I like the idea here of a king who's turned their back on the typical, and found a new, more peaceful passion. Also nice that you've reinforced the king's own changing interests with this structure, as it was previously important to his old interests— and has been converted to aid his newer pursuits.  
Also, during the year XXX, a plague spreaded the region...
"Spreaded" is not a word, you could rewrite this to say "a plague spread through the region" instead.   You've got a good core idea here! Best of luck through camp!

Jul 6, 2020 02:05 by William Belley

Thank you, and happy the connection feels Nice to Read. The explanation on the wording errors Helps and bbcode Will get edited.   Have a good summercamp!

Jul 6, 2020 03:07 by Simo

My repurposed building is an astronomic observatory too that maintained partially a double function. You made me realise I can flesh out a little more the historical notes on mine and maybe add some anecdotal episode. I second the suggestion of putting the author notes inside the quote, it gave me a little pause at first. The lightning rod is an interesting addition to a building of this type, are the experiments it serves magical or mundane or both?

Jul 6, 2020 04:25 by William Belley

Id be eager to Read your take !   For the Rod, i want to make it both. I try to make it 'hard magic' a bit by giving the magic system 'some' sense but its still a WIP.   I Will have Time to develop on that by end of month.   Happy summercamp!

Jul 6, 2020 08:16 by Simo

I moved to the computer screen and I noticed that your format allows google ads to sneak in the sidebar for the users with free accounts. You might want to fill up a little the side sections to avoid it.

Jul 7, 2020 01:42 by William Belley

those sly one ! imma see what i can do about that XD

Jul 6, 2020 03:10 by Bob O'Brien

Excellent ideas in the article that definitely meet the requirements of the prompt. I like the extra touch of the ghosts of the soldiers haunting the tower and defending it. I'd like to know, though, if those ghosts end up being part of the tourism package?   One grammar point... in the second paragraph of Purpose/Function section... you want "its", not "it's". The only time you use the apostrophe is if you are using the contraction for "it is". If you mean "belonging to it", then no apostrophe. (This is an extremely common English mistake even among native speakers.) There were a couple other grammar items, but I don't want this to become a grammar lesson - I don't want to downplay an excellent concept.   And I think Timepool mentioned this, but putting the author inside the quote block is just a matter of adding a vertical bar "|" followed by the Author text inside the quote

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Jul 6, 2020 22:23 by William Belley

Hello ! Indeed, i appreciate the moderate correction not being a full lesson haha.   As for the ghosts, they do creates some kinds of limited tourism, as despite the haunting rumors, there haven't been hostility towards living beings. thus, some spellcasters and other people interested in them come from time to time, but they prefer not getting too involved, staying alert and reclusive. I am planning to develop a little on them.   Happy Summercamp ! :)

Jul 6, 2020 03:26 by Makenzie Turney

This article was an interesting read. I would be interested in reading about the layout of the building and the construction of it more, as you currently gloss over the initial construction of the tower.

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Jul 6, 2020 22:25 by William Belley

hello cedar ! It is something that is a bit hard to develop, as it involves some tech talk i may be a bit unequipped for, but i could give it a try. By layour, do you mean a blueprint or sketch of what it looks like ?   Happy Summercamp ! :)

Jul 7, 2020 18:49 by Makenzie Turney

By "layout" I meant that you could describe a bit of the internal rooms of the Tower. Like, you could say "there are 6 large living quarters and 2 kitchens". That was a boring example, of course.

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