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The Sky Tower

"And lo the darkness rises into light, and so we bow before the divine," as transcribed from a poetry fragment from some centuries ago.

Located off a coast, amidst grey-blue skies and the calls of gulls, a tower stretches up impossibly high. It rises from the rock itself, from the sea depths. There is no visible viable entrance or exit. It has existed as long as the people of this land can remember, there in their grandparents' childhoods, and beyond that, in their ancestors' ancestors' first memories.   The tower rises so high it disappears among the clouds, which rarely clear completely here by the stormy sea. But on those few crystal days, when the sky bends true blue, the tower seems to pierce into the very heavens.   Strange a structure as it is, many myths and legends abound. Yet no one would mistake this for a mere miracle of nature. Not a speck of moss nor vine grows upon the tower, distinguishing it from the rock it sprouts from. It remains similarly untouched by the tide or time, smooth and unblemished and unaffected. Stare too long and twines of lighter dark seem to run through its stone, a shifting fabric of pitch.   Up and up, just barely visible as the dark black rock starts imperceptibly turning greyer, or clearer, at the very edge of human perception, windows are visible around the circumference. No bird has ever dared approach these openings, even in the worst of storms. Neither has any creature ever emerged from these mysterious portals, in either the harshest droughts or the most bountiful of years.   At its furthest reaches, on the clearest days, the tower appears crystalline, yet opaque all at once. It is all colors and yet nothing, the sun shining through unimpeded. Stare too long, whispers pass down the years, and you will lose all sight yet never lose your way for the rest of your life.   The tower stands, as it has and as it will. The people take comfort in that.

Purpose / Function

For what reason did it form or was constructed or sung into being, this awesome pillar? The tower is the deepest mystery of this land. It can be seen for such distances that even those who know not of the tower know its face. A giant of the land.

Alterations

There have been queens and scientists and fools who have tried to infringe upon the tower, to drill through, or climb, or (even once, foolishly) conquer. But no person is exempt from the tower's contempt. After all, it turns away nature even as it dwells in her bosom. None have ever laid hands upon this behemoth.

Architecture

Best estimates grant the Sky Tower a circumference of one day worth of unceasing travel by foot from sun up to sun up on the longest day of the year (circumference 95 km). It appears dark, darker than the deep sea, yet gradually becomes more translucent as your eyes scan up, though it is impossible to pinpoint the moment of change. Even this color somehow pales to an impossible not-shade in the distant heaven, when the clouds clear and one dares gaze so far. Even lower down, rather than a solid color at any singular point, the black seems to shift like the ocean when one focuses, as if a thousand coils move about.

History

It had existed for time immemorial even in the oldest of tales.
I think if I could touch it, Ama would come back from the sky.
--said by a child of about 5 years, last seen wandering by the shore closest the tower.

Date built: Unknown

Architect: Unknown

Purpose: Unknown

Alternative Names
Uklekrupu
Type
Geographic Feature
Any who dare desecrate the great tower should have their bones dashed against the dark rocks at its feet and their blood fed to the waters of the sea, to appease its wrath.
--as proclaimed during a sermon by Haivha, third Eye of the Watchful.
The Watchful is only one of many sects and religions which look to the tower. Many such groups have been noted to form and dissolve through the years, some robust in their time while others whither as soon as they form.

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Comments

Author's Notes

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Feb 20, 2019 04:21 by E. Jones

The mythic tone of this narration really lends well to the ancient feeling of the tower. The imagery is very vivid and I was drawn in the most by the mysterious windows. By the time I got down to the architecture section I already had a pretty good image in my mind, but when its told how long it would take to walk around this tower it really showed how truly massive the structure is. I would suggest changing the measurement to diameter across or the specific circumference to give a more immediate definition, but that might just be me.   What happened to the people who interacted with the tower? I think you've left a good hook to expand on the History section with this.   The sidebar looks really empty. Try filling it in with some more quotes or details, maybe put the header quote over in the sidebar.

Feb 20, 2019 05:28 by Nikki

Thanks so much! Yeah, I see what you're saying about the empty sidebar. I'm still figuring out how formatting an article works lol but I will definitely do that!

Feb 21, 2019 01:56

An artifact tower.   I presume you know very well already what the tower is or was, but as you put such an effort on keeping it mysterious, i will not inquire further regarding that. However, it heavily implies that your world is a world "after the fall" could imagine it being a Space lift. It kinda reminds me a little at the fist of god from Larry Nivens Ringworld (albeit there it was a mountain, which grew more translucent the higher one got).     So what i really like about it is the mystery, yet it seems rather hard to incorporate it into a Game, if one can't really interact. How would you go about that? Or are you using it solely for atmosphere reasons?

Feb 21, 2019 16:31 by Nikki

I really like the "after the fall" idea, as I was imagining this world solely in fantasy terms! something to look into if a seedling sprouts from that idea...   The world isn't for a campaign, but rather for a story. But i do admit I went for the mystery angle because i had plopped the tower down in a thus unexplored (by me) part of the world; it's kind of a launch point to explore this area, since its existence no doubt had huge effects in shaping the culture & people around it!

Feb 21, 2019 04:16 by Val

I enjoy the efforts you went to in order to describe this tower's size and mystery. The quotes in particular do a lot of good for adding context to its place in the world. I am curious, could we hear more about this individual who supposedly attempted to conquer the tower? I feel like that could make for a good story.

Feb 21, 2019 16:16 by Nikki

Definitely! just got to figure out who they were first lol Kinda plopped the tower in the middle of nowhere for this challenge, so this is a good chance to explore this part of my world!

Feb 21, 2019 14:08

I agree. It seems almost Lovecraftian in how it defies everyone and everything. I would expand more on just how people view it: culturally, religiously, philosophically; even economically. There must surly be pilgrims to the site, if it is not an irradiated wasteland.

Feb 21, 2019 16:34 by Nikki

oh definitely! i plan to think about that next; the tower is basically going to serve as a springboard for what the people/culture of this region would be like