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All Terrain Catering Vehicle

We lost the trail sometime early in the morning; our radios and GPS systems had gotten damaged when we ran from what looked like a bat the size of a horse. All of a sudden a drone appeared overhead, its robotic voice telling us to follow.   After thirty minutes, we came out into a glade where one of the ATCVs was parked. We were served grilled fish, fresh fluffy rolls, seaweed salad, and what tasted like potato and clam chowder. After a long day out in the cold it was hands down the best meal I have ever eaten.
— Lamarcus Pitts, Field Botanist
  All Terrain Catering Vehicles (ATCV) were used by the Department of Culinary Arts and Agriculture in the first decades after landing on Deseret. ATCVs were important tools in providing meals to research and working parties out in the field, as well as searching for native ingredients that were edible for humans and livestock.   Anywhere the colonists went the ATCVs traveled with them. They quickly becoming a part of popular culture, appearing in literature and paintings. Many of the Head Chefs that commanded the ATCVs were powerful personalities, making them popular guests on the nightly news as they spoke on topics ranging from agricultural development to new species that had been recently discovered.   The chefs that crew the ATCVs were also highly skilled botanists, biologists, and geologists, feverishly searching for new edible ingredients. Some crews focused on testing soil chemistry, looking for good locations to develop Desereti terroir. Others would hunt and butcher native animals, testing for toxicity and taste.   ATCV crews were first and foremost chefs. During the recruiting phase for the Deseret Colonial Expedition no one knew what cuisine would best suit the needs of the colonists or the environmental limitations of their new home. Each chef selected was meant to serve as guardians of cooking techniques and recipes from different cultures and nations from Old Earth.  
This is where Desereti cuisine is going to be made. This is where the culinary traditions we envisioned for ourselves either take root or die.
— Helena Brandão, Pattisier attached to ATCV 2 "The Wild Table"
 

Holiday Traditions

  Unfortunately for colonists, working in the field could mean missing out on many of the holiday traditions that were created in the first years on planet. Deseret is colder than Earth, and records indicate that the winter of 1 DE was particularly harsh. During December an exceptionally strong blizzard isolated many research parties out in the field.   Concerned over the low morale among researchers out in the field, the crew of ATCV 7 "The Melting Pot" made a risky 500 km drive to Zarahemla where they gathered food, letters, and gifts from the community. Upon their return Head Chef Jurren Zielman and Deputy Chef Dafina Pritchett, costumed as King Wenceslas and his Page from Christmas tradition, passed out gifts and letters while the rest of the crew prepared a feast.  
Bring me meat and bring me wine
Bring me pine logs hither
Thou and I will see him dine
When we bear him thither
Page and monarch forth they went
Forth they went together
Through the rude wind's wild lament
And the bitter weather
Good King Wenceslas, third stanza
  News of the event spread quickly among colonists, and ATCV crews at other locations began carrying out their own "King Wenceslas" parties. Over the years these celebrations became a beloved tradition, with each year seeing new additions to the festivities. In the present day it is common for caravans of ATCVs to leave towns during December, each led by their own King Wenceslas and Page, heading to remote research outposts or nearby towns. Modern ATCVs often carry supplies for large communal dining areas and mobile dancing floors.  

Legacy

ATCV's had been custom built by the Toyota Tsusho Corporation and Deseret would not have the resources or industrial base to replace them for many years. Over time wear and tear would see many ATCV's decommissioned and their crews re-assigned. Many of Deseret's most prestigious restaurants have their origins in crews that remained together such as "The Wild Table" in downtown Taumata.   On July 3rd, 67 DE the last of the original ATCV's, the "Purple Lantern", was retired from service. A memorial service was held, featuring a reunion of all living members of ATCV crews. The "Purple Lantern" was turned into an interactive monument at the Fred Roger's park and playground in Taumata where it remains to this day.   On August 4th, 132 DE the vehicle design firm Sepharad revealed plans to produce two lines of modern ATCV's. These were the smaller Emma-class model for use along city streets, and the Lazarus-class model, slightly larger than the original ATCVs that arrived with the colonists. The Emma-class ATCVs have remained in production since and have become quite popular among immigrants from Bhramputra Prime.
  When you pursue great flavor, you also pursue great ecology
— Dan Barber, American Chef, early 21st Century AD

Speed

Top speed of 130 kph, average speed of 90 kph  

Complement / Crew

10  

Cargo & Passengers Capacity

Weight limit of 4 tons, seating for 5 additional passengers  

Power Generation

Hydrogen cells, wind turbines, and solar panels.  

Propulsion

Electric engine, 8 all terrain wheels  

Communication Tools & Systems

Satellite radio, repeater antenna  

Sensors

GPS, Organic Toxicity Scanner  

Additional & Auxiliary Systems

Bulk Cold Storage Compartment, Stoves, Planchas, Ovens, Fryers, and Water Purifiers.  

Hangars & Docked Vessels

Each ATCV comes equipped with 10 small drones that can be programmed for collecting plant and herb ingredients.
ATCV Head Chefs were selected by the Department of Culinary Arts, who in turn chose their crews from among the pool of remaining chefs traveling to Deseret. Each crew member was assigned a specific role and station they were responsible for. These included a mixture of eight of the following:  
  • Chef de Cuisine (Head Chef)
  • Sous Chef (Deputy Chef)
  • Sauté Chef/Saucier (Sauce chef)
  • Boucher (Butcher Chef)
  • Poissonnier (Fish Chef)
  • Rotisseur (Roast Chef)
  • Friturier (Fry Chef)
  • Grillardin (Grill Chef)
  • Garde Manger (Pantry Chef)
  • Pattisier (Pastry Chef)
  • Entremetier (Vegetable Chef)
Additionally 2 more crew spots were reserved for the driver/mechanic and a medic, who would switch off on filling the role of dishwasher, waiter/waitress, or kitchen porter.

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Jul 15, 2020 20:00 by Kahuna The Elder

When Max Max meets food trucks. Love it!

Jul 15, 2020 20:00

Thanks!

Jul 15, 2020 21:47 by Dani

I love the story of their first winter, and their holiday traditions are a nice touch!! Great choice for a vehicle!


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Jul 15, 2020 21:50

Thanks! For some reason I am obsessed with the carol "Good King Wenceslas" right now.

Jul 17, 2020 08:50

It's been a while since I've done a lot of these really in-depth pieces of feedback, so hopefully I'm not too rusty. Ask and ye shall recieve :D    

Overview

  I really like the concept of the article - food is one of those incredibly interesting cultural pieces for me and there's just so much information packed into every meal and ritual. I'm also a bit of a logistics nerd, so it appeals to me on that level, too. :D   Their role as cultural guardians of food recipes and stuff like that is a cherry ontop.   We're short on time here with Summer Camp, but there's some things you could think about maybe expanding on:  
  • How has their religion impacted or changed the roles of the vehicle? Has there been any conflict? Mormonism has some dietary restrictions if I recall, and some chefs might want to skirt them, especially if they are in the minority.
  • How does one become part of a ATCV crew?
  • Is it a desirable position? Is there a lot of competition over the available spots?
  • What's the mortality rate like for ATCVs? You mention they hunt wild-life to test for food - does the wild-life ever fight back? Have there been any particularly impressive failures or successes?
  • Are all 10 members chefs? What is the typical composition of an ATCV crew?
  In the main panel, you use a past tense when describing the vehicles ("ATCV crews however were first and foremost chefs.") and in the side panel, present ("Each ATCV comes equipped with 10 small drones that can be programmed for collecting plant and herb ingredients.").   English isn't my first language, so there might be a standard here that I'm not familiar with, but this kind of threw me off - is the suggestion here that ATCVs are no longer in use? If so, that's worth touching on and explaining how they've integrated back into society, where its crews went, and what fantastic resturants they opened up.   If they are still active, how has their role changed since the early days of planetary exploration and colonization?    

Formatting

  The formatting is fine - the break with paragraphs, headers, and quotes makes it easy to read.   If you can, I would try to get the side panel to extend all the way to match the main panel. An idea for that might be one or two pictures of foodstuffs on the side panel. It would also add a splash of color to the "look" of the article. Red and green would look especially good to contrast a bit with the dark and blue.   Other minor things you could consider would be to bold key phrases, especially in the first paragraph or so in the article, but that's really minor and up to taste.    

The Nitty Gritty

 
We lost the path sometime early in the morning.
  "trail" might fit better here, given the context of an unexplored region, or something like it?  
Our radios were broken and our map had washed downstream when we ran from what looked like a bat the size of a horse.
  "Our radios were broken" reads a little strange - Grammarly tells me it's a passive voice, but I don't know how much I trust it :P I might expect something like "Our radios were gone" or "We'd lost the radios", or something like that - 'were broken' reads oddly (but again, not a native speaker)  
All of a sudden a drone appeared overhead, broadcasting a voice that told us to follow.
  "broadcasting a voice" reads a bit strangely here, too. Something like "with a message telling us to follow" or "telling us to follow" might sound more natural?  
After thirty more minutes we came out into a glade where one of the ATCVs was parked.
  You could probably cut "more" from the sentence, and maybe add a comma after 'minutes' :)  
All Terrain Catering Vehicles (ATCV) were used by the Department of Culinary Arts in the first decades after landing on Deseret.
  This again implies they are no longer used, is that correct?  
ATCVs were important tools in providing meals to research and working parties out in the field as well as searching for native ingredients that were edible for humans and livestock.
  I would consider a comma after "as well"  
Anywhere the colonists went the ATCVs traveled with them, quickly becoming a part of popular culture.
  How did they become part of popular culture? When I think about that, I kinda envision media - that they become mainstays of the news, personalities on space-twitter, that sort of thing. How does this manifest here? :)  
The chefs that crew the ATCVs were highly skilled botanists, biologists, and geologists in their own right, feverishly searching for new edible ingredients.
  If you wanted, you could shorten this sentence by cutting out "in their own right" and just rephrase it into "were also highly skilled ..."  
Some crews focused on testing soil chemistry, looking for good locations to develop Desereti terroir.
  Is this how the geologists feature into this? Most people won't directly tie them to food things, so that may merit some elaboration. :)  
ATCV crews however were first and foremost chefs.
  I'd consider moving the however to the end of the sentence, with a comma. :)  
Each chef that was selected was meant to serve as guardians of cooking techniques and recipes from different cultures and nations from Old Earth.
  Instead of "that was selected" I'd consider something shorter like "each chef chosen" or just "selected", or something :)  
Concerned over the low morale among researchers the crew of ATCV 7 "The Melting Pot" made a risky 500 km drive to Zarahemla where they gathered food, letters, and gifts from the community.
  From the community or for the community? I'm not sure I follow the flow of events here - was it at Zarahemla where the morale was low, or among the ATCV crew?   I would also consider a comma after researchers :)  
Over the years these celebrations became a beloved tradition, with each year seeing new additions to the festivities
  For later expansion, it could be worth talking about some of those additions and regional variants :)  
Modern ATCVs often carry supplies for large communal dining areas and mobile dancing floors.
  Like so!   I would also consider if there's something punchier you could end the article on - something to really seal the deal, so to speak. Something about how they've become enshrined in Deserati culture, or a quote from someone about how they were important to the colonization process.   All in all, it's a fantastical article and I enjoyed reading it. :D


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Jul 17, 2020 20:19

Thank you so much! I've gone ahead and changed a lot based on your feedback, I hope you like it!