Xander Reveler
Charm is a simple act, but attraction is a wondrous act.
Born aristocrat...
... Risen Artist
Glarn
Species
Vampire
Ethnicity
Lower Duchy
Charm is a simple act, but attraction is a wondrous act.
I want to thank for the kind comments and now I have included some of the things that was adviced! If there is anything you think is missing or want to know more about, then don't hesitate to write a comment.
Great article! I love a good character who rebels against the plans laid out for them at birth, especially when they take the time to slowly plot, gain some money and knowledge, and then leave at the last minute. The whole thing wrapping around near the end to have Xander meeting his family again while performing was great! I got a good sense of who Xander was as a person from reading this -- he didn't feel one-dimensional. I think if you really wanted to give some more glimpses into who he is, peppering more quotes from him throughout the article would be a great way of doing it. A quote about what he might say to his family, some private discussions to help him gain lodging in the early days, something like that! Otherwise, it's great :D
Thanks for the kind feedback! I have been thinking about adding quotes, but that probably will be a later addition since I am a bit unsure of the timeline with the challenge.
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