Divine Golem
All Gnomes know the story of the Divine Golem of Tanajin. The legend was even more alive among my civilization since we were descendants of the Gnomes that survived that mythical war. It is the event that forced us underground and it only strengthened our hate for the Selefer. Even though the Gnomes are quite spread out over the world they all know the Ilbon myth of the Divine Golem. Some view it as a fact and although there is likely some truth to the legend it is impossible to verify. According to the legend the Gnome God Tanajin created a powerful construct of enormous size known as the Tanajin's Juggernaut, or the Divine Golem to the believers. This weapon of destruction was used in a war against the Selefer. That war ended in a cataclysmic event and its effects are still clearly visible today.
The Myth
In ancient times above the surface our God led us along. His vision was clear and his rule was just, he truly was the best of us all. But as he sat on his crystal throne, our God Tanajin grew restless.
His high priest saw his somber facade and inquired his lord "Oh Divine, I see you hurting and don't know why. The people love you, the life you gave us is great. Is there not anything we can do the repay?"
Tanajin's lifted his face and looked him in the eyes "Don't worry my child, my life here is good it is only company I crave. In the centuries that have past I found not a single God here, they all have gone to the heavens. If only I could travel further and look for them, alas I can't leave this behind"
The high priest pondered on his words and returned the next day.
Tanajin's lifted his face and looked him in the eyes "Don't worry my child, my life here is good it is only company I crave. In the centuries that have past I found not a single God here, they all have gone to the heavens. If only I could travel further and look for them, alas I can't leave this behind"
"What if I stayed in your stead and lead the people here? You could go on your journey and create a new realm for us there."
The room seemed a little brighter as Tanajin stood up. "You are right I can leave some of my children here and take the others along. We will travel across the ocean and spread out there, the adventure already lifts my spirit. You are wise my child you can have the crystal throne until my return."
The room seemed a little brighter as Tanajin stood up. "You are right I can leave some of my children here and take the others along. We will travel across the ocean and spread out there, the adventure already lifts my spirit. You are wise my child you can have the crystal throne until my return."
Tanajin started making preparations for the journey but also needed to find a way to protect his people against sea. He decided to create a golem so large that it could walk through the oceans. A path would be created that the ships of his children could follow across the vast blue expanse towards the west.
For a 100 days and a 100 nights Tanajin worked on his creation. During the last night he produced a lightning bolt and breathed life into the Divine Golem. With his work done he set out with numerous ships in the wake of this creation.
The journey was long and hard but after fightning off large sea snakes, metallic monster of the deep and ferocious storms, the Gnomes arrived at their destination. The new realms became beacons of light and hope in the western continent now known as Farlis. But great nations create jealously among the lesser ones.
Meanwhile Tanajin continued his search for another God but remained unsuccessful in his endeavour. Along the way he did meet new friends and allies, especially the Dragons of the west, were welcoming to the Gnomes.
Sadly the peace did not last as the vile Selefer, who were jealous of the Gnomes, devised a plot. While Tanajin was away on a search they attacked the Gnome nations. Tanajin himself did not hear about this vile plan and could not aid his people in time.
At first the Selefer laid waste to the Gnomes but once Tanajin arrived the odds turned. The true power of the Divine Golem was revealed as it laid waste to entire armies of the Selefer. Fear grew in the hearts of all those that laid their eyes upon it. Battle after battle ended with the evildoers fleeing.
But the Selefer were yet to start their most devious and evil of plots. They used magic which any sane person would avoid at all cost, the Primal Chaos. As the Dragons and Gnomes joined hands for the final battle the Selefer put their plans into motion. The strongest Selefer mage, the Snake Devil, stood in front of the Divine Golem. He mustered ancient and alien words which should not be heard. In one moment the battle ended and all combatants were gone. Our Tanajin finally joined the other Gods in the heavenly realms, but the Gnomes would never see him or the Divine Golem again.
This is a nice myth, and I like the way you've chosen to format the article itself, with the presentation of the myth and then the discussion around it. A small comment I have about the format is regarding your quotes, adding a line break or paragraph break between different speakers is a rule for prose, and it gets confusing when everything is in the same paragraph. Comment regarding the myth itself now. I like the myth but I think a few details are missing to make the article feel complete. I was excited to have learned more about the Selefer, they are just my fav in your world :p I think the myth section is missing a small conclusion to mention what happened to the Selefer. I gather than since you mention later that they were defeated that most of them died because of the magic they used? How many of them did vs survived? And that was only their warriors who got hurt, right? Did the rest of the population lived on for some more time or was that the event that triggered their extinction? In the myth, you can also add that the Selefer enslaved many gnomes and moved them to another location, since when later you mention that some gnomes are descendant of those enslaved ones, it comes a bit out of nowhere. You can also maybe add a bit about Tanajin and if they are still worshipped among today's gnomes or if it's all just a cute story for them.
Oh I will take those format changes in mind, see how I can mix it around :) Well everyone nearby the event did die but the Gnomes themselves were not able to recover from it since they lost some very important areas to them. And with the dissapearance of their leader and god they were indeed enslaved by the Selefer who did have a larger population left. That would indeed be a good idea to mention somewhere As to Tanajin himself he is still worshipped by the western Gnomes but less by the eastern ones where he is rather seen as an origin god who gave his rule over to Dragons. Will see where I can squeeze that in :) Thanks Amélie!