In the beginning, the Stone family was one man: a shady Sootopolian merchant with big dreams. He had made a bit of a name for himself by trading and selling his latest inventions, trinkets, and valuable gemstones, and had direct ties to the king.
The merchant found himself enamored by the Sootopolian princess, Sapphire; not because he loved her or anything, but because he wanted the fame, the power, and the money.
He considered himself lucky to have been able to go to the mainland on the same ship as her, but he quickly became resentful when he realized that the princess had fallen for
the leader of a nearby group of people. He wanted to eliminate this new person at any cost, so after months of careful planning, he set the Sootopolian's tent city as well as the dense forest nearby on fire, pinning the blame on Emerald.
The plan succeeded, only somewhat. Emerald, despite her innocence, was sent to be executed, but the princess wouldn't let her take her partner's life without taking her own. With the princess now dead, the merchant pulled a lot of strings to get himself into a position of power, in which he succeeded.
Thousands of years go by, with the original merchant growing his family name into one of the richest and most powerful in history, continuing to invent technological advancements under a company founded and run by the family, the Devon Corporation. The family lived relatively conflict free, usually getting what they wanted with money. Though thousands of years later, the Stone family would encounter a very familiar face.
The year is 1960, and the Stone family currently consists of a father, a mother, and their 5 sons - the youngest of which being a 15 year old boy named Joseph Stone. Their father, the current patriarch of Devon, has been in heated argument with the lorekeeper family of Fallarbor town, as well as a small dedicated group of Draconids. Nearby Fallarbor, geologists discovered both a powerful geothermal heating source, as well as a possible large cavern - but weren't allowed to excavate or investigate further due to the Draconids having a historical right to the area. No amount of money would cause the elusive matriarch of the Draconids to budge, simply telling him to "fuck off". While the father wanted to keep things physically peaceful, the air between the two families was growing tense.
The father's sons, wanting to do their father's work for him, took a much less pacifistic route; threatening the lorekeeper family and vandalizing important locations in an attempt to draw the matriarch out - while the current lorekeeper claimed she was the 'matriarch', the sons knew she was bluffing and the true leader was somewhere, hidden.
On a cold and dry November evening, the sons received a letter, telling them to come to a location in Fallarbor, promising negotiation. The letter was signed with a simple delta.
The sons saw it as a change to escalate the situation, and brought not very legal weapons by the world's standards.
5 sons arrived at a lonely driveway, and the green-haired matriach appeared before them. What started as a tense conversation quickly turned into one of Hoenn's most ashamed incidents.
7 people were killed; 3 Draconids, including the matriarch and the lorekeeper's husband, as well as 4 of the sons, leaving Joseph as the only one left. The incident was entirely man-on-man and no pokemon were involved or harmed.
The event left Joseph with a burning hatred, and a thirst for revenge.
After his father retired, he took Devon with a cold grip. Unlike his father, he
always got his way. Underhand deals, bribery, blackmail, and assassinations were par for the course with him. He also begun funding Devon's secret and controversial use of infinity energy.
Joseph had a son, Steven, who he didn't particularly care for, but in his growing age, treated harshly in an attempt to create a viable heir.
But Joseph couldn't play his game forever - without his knowledge, Steven had teamed up with the current lorekeeper, Zinnia, as well as some others, and completely exposed Joseph for all the thing he'd done and brought him to justice.
While the family's reputation took a major hit from those events, Steven took over as the family leader, as he was technically the only one left. Steven vowed to better Devon from that point, and try to heal and help those his father had hurt.
Very cool! The grammar isn't that bad. From an editor's perspective, I would say the biggest opportunity here is to chop down some of the longer sentences. Otherwise, it flows very well! Love the story of the Stone Family. I've been reading a lot of 'royal families', and even used that for my entry - nice to see a corporate family as a change of pace!
Clarification: By "chop down" I don't mean cut content. Rather, split some of the longer sentences into 2 or 3 shorter ones. :)
thank you ^^!! i'll try and remember that for the future!! i sure do love my commas