Carthage
Drawing By EarlNoir
History
Carthaginians
The city Cartage was settled by Carthaginians. The exact date is unknown but myths say that Dido, queen of Carthage settled it. This civilization dominated trade and was a naval superpower.Alexander the Great
When Alexander the Great wanted to conquer the city he was stopped multiple times by its navy. Nonetheless, after years of struggle, Alexander finally managed to infiltrate the city. Because they were able to fight him off so long he respected their talent... and their riches. He let them keep their way of life but levied tons of taxes on the city as revenge for wasting his time. This damaged the trade severely and pushed many into piracy.When we give someone our time, we actually give a portion of our life that we will never take back. So I shall charge you for wasting my life!-By Alexander the Great when he conquered Carthage
Romans
When later the Romans would rise Carthage was but only a shell of its former self. The Diadochi Wars, the succession wars about who will gain Alexander's empire had caused the economy to crash and completely prevent any trade, because of this the Romans had no trouble defeating their ancient rival and had no need to punish them. When they read Greek texts about how prosperous this city used to be they rebuilt and reorganized the city creating a new golden age for the Carthaginians. Later on, The Roman empire claimed the western part of Alexander's empire.Our old rivals are not our threat, enemies have become allies-Scipio Africanus about Hannibal Barca
Role in The Fall of The West
However in the decline of the empire under the rules Trajanus and the invasion of the Franks under the command of Clovis the Carthaginian navy would play a major role. The Roman emperor was caught fleeing Roma by a Carthaginian patrol en brought to the court of the governor of Africa, Hannibal VIII. He spread the news about the emperor fleeing and declared his independence. He will later be the one that demanded the execution of the emperor and his family. Later on, he would be the one accepting Clovis's proposal to invade Byzantium which resulted in a major defeat and losing most of the Carthaginian fleet.Downfall
Sadly the next person that arrived through the gate was Justinian, and he was not someone that forgave treason (see The Nika Riots ). When he was restoring the empire Carthage stood no chance because of their still hadn't been rebuilt. He sacked and pillaged Carthage, salting with it as the Romans did in Clustrum but adding a Pluto's curse. He founded another city for the surviving civilians because it wasn't their fault.Now
in 300 Pr the second son of the emperor Bard, Nickeratus, son of Demeter, Athena and Apollo is the governor of Eremus and Africa, they are wastelands and useless. He's trying to transform the wasteland into a fertile land to feed to the vastly growing population of the empire.Geography
Fauna & Flora
Natural Resources
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So right off the bat, I'm pretty curious about this world. I'm seeing a lot of names of things that I recognize! Checking out the world map though, it's definitely not the same map as earth one would expect. Is your setting a sort of alternate history? There is a lot of information in that opening paragraph! I think the article would really benefit by breaking it up, and spreading it across the rest of the article. I think I read you're fairly new to world anvil, which is totally okay. I have some recommendation in that case! The side bar is your friend, it's a great place to put information that, while important, might be more secondary information. When editing your article, under the "design" tab, you can scroll down to "sidebar content". I'd use this area to cover your succession of rulers of Carthage. Using the h1, h2, and h3 header BBCode, you can format it to however you like. For grammar and the likes, I noticed a couple run on sentences. I'd give the article another proof read, and try to split some of them up if you could! For example: "The salt is cursed and will absorb any water it touches and because humans are consists 70% of water it will slowly dry you out and transform you into a mummy so make sure to take enough water with you when crossing this area." You could rewrite that as: "The salt in Carthage is cursed, absorbing any water it touches. As humans consist of mostly water, it slowly dries them out, transforming them into mummies. Ensure you bring enough water when crossing this area." or, something along those lines. Run on sentences often take the reader out of the story, breaking the immersion. then one last thing, but not necessary for articles -- maybe add some images! It'd be nice to see some pictures of the ruined Carthage, of the cursed sand. Maybe a picture of someone who failed to bring enough water :P Anyways, good job! Welcome to World Anvil! Enjoy your stay!
Thx for the feedback, i'll try some of the design functions. I totally forgot about pictures so i'll add some aswell.
It's a world where the most influential people from our world arrive through a gate. In this world there are gods like the Hellenic once but also others like the Islamic or the Germanic.