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New Year's Resolutions 2023 | UnagiLogic

Article 1: Limani Supplies Dealer

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/hesli-sh4d0wph03n1x/a/limani-supplies-dealer-organization

FRESH WATER EELS

  • Icon of the group as you first come in catches the eye on the top right. Also having a catchy slogan is fun to read from the start.
  • Good job sharing what the an advertisement would look like. These will create great adventure hooks for if/when adventurers decide to join a service group

SALT WATER EELS

  • For the advertisement at the top, I think another section may look better for it
  • If you want a unique name to sound a specific way, add a [that word here] so the readers know what it should/ you would like it to sounds like (if you care)
  • When we used the word phoenixery, I did not have enough context to what it entailed.

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both. I loved the emblem of the Limani Supplies Dealers as you first come in as it catches the eye on the top right. Also having a catchy slogan is fun to read and grabbed my attention. Great job sharing what an advertisement would look like. These will create great adventure hooks for if/when adventurers decide to join a service group.   For the initial advertisement at the top, I think another section of the document may look better for it, either at the very top to pull readers in before the initial text, or right before the services to hype the reader up for all the different services offered. Because I love pronouncing words in general, something to consider is if you want a unique name to sound a specific way, add a pronunciation so the reader know what it should/ you would like it to sounds like (this feedback of course depends on if you care what the reader thinks the word sounds like). Lastly when you used the word phoenixery, I did not have enough context to what the word all entailed. If I had to guess, it means a place to trade or hold goods? xD   Hopefully this feedback helps. Thanks for the great read!

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that emblems and slogans are an important part of creating a organization. I also learned that placing physical world advertisements into the written content is a good way to create adventure hooks. I was reminded that using the links option to allow the reader to fully immerse themselves into the content is a great habit to continue to build. The snippet section is also equally important, as it is the initial pull for me as a reader. Without these sections, the impact is others will be less likely to look at the content. Overall, I have a better understanding of these concepts now.      

Article 2: Mutagen

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/tmnt3A-mystic-forest-amevelloblue/a/mutagen-material    

FRESH WATER EELS

  • The image of the mouser with a canister of mutagen immediately draws me into the article
  • Great job having the description of Mutagen at the top of the article. This gives the reader a clear understanding of what it is
  • The properties section clearly sums up need to know information on the material leaving the reader to want to read more information on the material.
 

SALT WATER EELS

  • Background image behind the words is a slight distraction from reading the article. Less transparency over the written words would most likely fix this issue.
  • Having more images when possible is always appreciated
  • Expand on the environmental impact the Mutagen has had on earth as in what contamination protocols have been developed and potentially information of what adventure hooks could be created from this environmental problem (if this is for a campaign)
 

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both.   I loved the initial image at the start of the article of the Mouser with a canister of mutagen. As a visual reader, I love seeing images of what's being described. Great job having the description of Mutagen at the top of the article. This gives the reader a clear understanding of what it is. The properties section clearly sums up the need to know information leaving the reader to want to dive deeper and learn more about the material.   For some constructive feedback, the background image behind the words was a slight distraction for me as I read through the article. Consider less transparency over the written words as this can make it easier to read. Since I love images so much, I would consider more images to have more things to look at. As an example, I was imagining the worm and would have love to see the visualized concept. Lastly, I would think about expanding on the environmental impact the Mutagen has had on earth. Things like contamination protocols, and information that can lead to adventure hooks based on those environmental problems (if this material is for a campaign with players). This way I would have more information to read about in this section and gain more investment in your material.   Hope this feedback helps! Great Job creating this material!  

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that when creating a material, ensure you have properly given the material a great description at the start that pulls the reader in. The description does not necessarily need a lot of words to be great, just compelling enough to keep the readers attention. I learned that background images can be distracting if they are transparent so it's something to keep in mind if I use that function. When creating a material, tie the material back into your world as much as you can to give the readers lots of points of views when dealing with the material.      

Article 3: Blue-Tongued Madness

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/Melior/a/blue-tongue-madness-condition  

FRESH WATER EELS

  • I love the initial image as the header of the article as well as the image of what a tongue would look like
  • The symptoms and development section is a great tool to read and it gives the creator tools to create unique characters.
  • I like the black background of the article (aesthetics are good)
  • Navigation is good (if it's not just for looks)
  • Bio section with a follow button at the bottom of the article
  • Follow button at the top-right of the article
 

SALT WATER EELS

  • The first cautionary tale from a father to a child, I would like to see a more flushed out tale as I would like to open up this tale (linked content) and read more about this fun tale (like little red riding hood) if this makes sense
 

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both. I loved the initial image as the header of the article as well as the image of what a tongue would look like under this condition. These images really help me as a viewer get into the lore of what is written. I really enjoyed the section for symptoms and development. This section really helps me as a creator to think of the condition from the viewpoint of creating unique characters who may use this product for nefarious reasons. Overall, great job with the cadence of information, it was a great read   For a piece of constructive feedback, when you first introduced the cautionary tale from a father to a child, I would have loved to see a more flushed out tale (as in a linked page to a larger book. an example being like Little Red Riding Hood). As I was reading this cautionary tale, I felt compelled to read a book talking about this tale. (Hope this makes sense :D) Adding this additional lore, will keep me even more invested in the condition.   Hope this feedback helps! Great Job creating this condition, it was fun to read!  

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that if you create a tale, My personal style of reading, I want to learn more about that sub-culture. Tales are a great way to create investment from the reader. I also learned that it's very important to have a clear cadence of information while writing conditions. Sections like Overview, Symptoms, Condition Development, Recovery and Prevention are all important to have fully flushed out when creating a condition. I learned that I really like how black backgrounds look, so I will be incorporating this in my world at some point. I also learned that I want to add better navigation to my pages, but find ways to really hide it from the main view as not to distract from the content itself. I will also create a bio at the bottom of my articles, and may add a section for a right-hand side follow button.      

Article 4: Lootbox Eve

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/luridity/a/lootbox-eve-ritual  

FRESH WATER EELS

  • Really liked the aesthetics of the Lootbox Eve title and present image. This immediately draws my attention and gets me excited to read more about your tradition!
  • When you used the term mid2day, you added a snippet popup that explained the term in greater detail. This is great because I immediately am able to answer my question of what it means and continue enjoying the article.
  • I loved the selection of images throughout the content and the footer image after reading about the event.
 

SALT WATER EELS

  • The 4 images at the top of the article was slightly overwhelming as a reader to take in all the different images. Consider only your favorite image as the header
  • As I read through the content, I noticed myself stopping while reading to ensure I had read everything correctly. As an example this sentence, "When there are no rules and the object is to steal presents from others who will be wholeheartedly defending them, one can almost bet on the injury counts." took me a few reads. Consider restructuring the sentence. 
 

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both.   I really enjoyed the aesthetics of the Lootbox Eve title and present icon/image. This immediately draws my attention to the content and gets me excited to read more about your tradition! When you used the term "mid2day", you added a snippet popup that explained the term in greater detail. This is great because I immediately am able to answer my own question of what the term means and continue enjoying the article. After reading the tradition I liked looking at all the images again, and I enjoyed the footer images the most.   For some constructive feedback the 4 images at the top of the article was slightly overwhelming for me as a reader to take in all the different images. Consider only your favorite image as the header. This will help keep the focus on the content written initially, at least for myself. One last thing I noticed while reading through the tradition is I was stopping while reading a few times to ensure I had read everything correctly. As an example this sentence, "When there are no rules and the object is to steal presents from others who will be wholeheartedly defending them, one can almost bet on the injury counts." took me a few reads. Although I could not find all the words to describe how I felt while reading sentences like this, I do think that restructuring the sentences will be helpful.    I hope this feedback is helpful. Thanks again for the great read. Keep up the great work!    

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that snippet popups are cool. Whenever you need to explain anything, but not necessarily put all the words into the article, add a snippet so the reader gets just enough information without being immediately overwhelmed. I learned that too many images at the beginning of the content can be overwhelming for me, and that I need to ensure to re-read my written content to ensure that it is understandable by all who decide to read it. This is a skill to master for me. From reading this article I am more inspired to create compelling and visually exciting openings.    

Article 5: Leik-Magic Technology

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/tai-sans-hearth-ninodonlord/a/leik-magic-technology  

FRESH WATER EELS

  • When the article first loads, I love the initial image at the top and enjoyed seeing the source of the image to the right. The reason this was a unique idea is because it helps me as a viewer connect more personally to the content as I also use Midjourney for similar purposes.  
  • I liked seeing linked content to Parent Technology. It gives the viewer more chances to become fully invested in your technology!
  • I enjoyed that you bolded section of the content. As a viewer, I assumed that these may turn into additional links later on, which gets me excited to come back and look for more content to read as you progress.
 

SALT WATER EELS

  • The first sentence under brief history "Even before Dorralias founding, the strange crystals found in the cliffs around the city had been known to sages and philosophers, though at the time the crystals were only known as a novelty item, which can, when wet glow for a while before fading." This sentence was moderately difficult to read. Consider adding a period after philosophers to shorten the sentence, or looking at ways to restructure the sentence. 
  • Under the section called "Complexity" I was unsure as a reader if "Liek-toos" was the term you were heading for or if Liek-tools was more what you wanted.
 

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both.   I really enjoyed the initial image at the top and enjoyed seeing the source of the image to the right. The reason this was a unique idea is because it helps me as a viewer connect more personally to the content as I also use Midjourney for similar purposes. I enjoyed seeing linked content to Parent Technology. It gives the viewer more chances to become fully invested in your technology! I also enjoyed that you bolded section of the content. As a viewer, I assume that these may turn into additional links later on, which gets me excited to come back and look for more content to read as you progress.   For some constructive feedback lets look at the first sentence under brief history "Even before Dorralias founding, the strange crystals found in the cliffs around the city had been known to sages and philosophers, though at the time the crystals were only known as a novelty item, which can, when wet glow for a while before fading." This sentence was moderately difficult to read for me. Consider adding a period after philosophers to shorten the sentence, or looking at ways to restructure the sentence. Last feedback would be under the section called "Complexity" I was unsure as a reader if "Liek-toos" was the term you were heading for, or if Liek-tools was more what you wanted. If the latter, then just double check the work for inconsistencies to what you want other to read!   I hope this feedback is helpful. Thanks again for the great read. Keep up the great work!  

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned bolding sections is a cool way to excite myself as a reader to be prepared for incoming articles. I learned adding a section called Parent Technologies in this case is an exciting way to gain additional buy-in into the article. I also learned that sharing your image source as your Midjourney creation helps others see that it is a helpful tool for creation process. This also created a bonding experience for myself as I got to see others having the same amount of fun I was. Although a smaller thing I learned it's always important to remember that double checking your work, removing run on sentences and fixing minor errors gives a nice clean polish and feel for your work.        

Article 6: Kinsolted Profession

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/elonia-acal346/a/kinsolted-profession  

FRESH WATER EELS

  • I really like when I see pronunciations of a word. It takes away the guesswork which keeps me focused on the content
  • I really enjoyed reading the quote at the bottom of the article. It adds a lot of lore to the profession and is fun to read. This really drives investment of the reader to want more.
  • Overall, I have an initial lust for more information which is a great sign that you have created intriguing content for viewers
 

SALT WATER EELS

  • When you first talk about Kinsol the god of beasts, consider bolding his name. As a viewer this helps me see that there is more to the story and potentially more content will come once you replace the bolded name with a link to known information about Kinsol (barring that it is not hidden information to the adventure)
  • When first talking about "Munt" and "Tauis", consider adding a snippet popup to give a brief description of what they look like. This will help the reader more fully visualize what you would like them to look like.
  • Consider placing the quote above the section called "Swearing in of the Kinsolted". I believe reading this quote earlier on will really inspire readers to want and read more of the content provided. Also, there are functions I've seen on other individuals articles that allow you to place information in little "speech bubbles" that makes the content stand out. I think these "speech bubbles" would look great for your quote/motto
 

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both.   I really like when I see pronunciations of a word. It takes away the guesswork which keeps me focused on the content. You did a great job of this at the very start of the article. The quote/motto at the bottom of the article was a compelling read. It adds a lot of lore and flavor to the profession and is fun to read. This really drives investment of the reader to want to read more of the article. Overall, I have an initial lust for more information which is a great sign that you have created intriguing content for viewers!   For constructive feedback, When you first talk about Kinsol the god of beasts, consider using the bold function on their name. As a viewer, this helps me see that there is more to the story and potentially more content will come once you replace the bolded name with a link to known information about Kinsol (barring that it is not hidden information to the adventure). When you first talked about "Munt" and "Tauis", consider adding a snippet popup to give a brief description when you hover over their names of what they look like. This will help the reader more fully visualize what you would like them to look like and add flavor to your worldbuilding. Consider placing the quote above the section called "Swearing in of the Kinsolted". I believe reading this quote earlier on will really inspire readers to want and read more of the article. Also, there are functions I've seen on other individuals articles that allow you to place information in little "indented speech squares" that makes the content stand out. I think these "speech squares" would look great for your quote/motto.   I hope this feedback is helpful. Thanks again for the great read. Keep up the great work!  

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that I still love pronunciations and a little more about why they're important to me. I also learned that a compelling motto can really drive someone (me) to read an entire article. I learned that whenever you use words that are unique to your world, adding brief descriptions really adds to the flavor, lore and appeal of the article. If I want to drive the investment of the reader, then adding these small additions will be very helpful. I will be taking time to look through my content and practice some of these methods.        

Article 7: Oaken Tower Building

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/the-sagas-jester25/a/oaken-tower-landmark  

FRESH WATER EELS

  • I love the decorative page border as I look at the article
  • I love the image as it first loads and the custodian who talks about it right away
  • I also enjoy the use of a unique font. I was able to clearly read each title which is great because I don't like wasting my time trying to read fonts that are too difficult to read. Also, you didn't overuse the font which helps it stand out as a unique element of the article.
  • When hovering over your links, I enjoyed seeing the additional writing about the "Banor" and "Forest Guard" as examples. These snippets of information help me see the lush environments you've created
  • I like the darker paper texture behind the written words. This gives a slight feeling of it being written on a piece of parchment.
  • Hidden place is a great way to create adventure hooks.

SALT WATER EELS

  • For images as headers, I enjoy when I can see the whole image at one time vs scrolling to see more of the image.
  • When you have linked article in your article, I saw that a snippet of one of them, didn't show additional information, but when I clicked on it, it was a fully developed article. I found this under the section called "A Forgotten Ambition" the first link to the "Kingdom of Ardanida". Consider adding a draw in statement here to continue building excitement of your world.

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both.   I really like the decorative page borders as I opened the article. The image as it first loads is visually appealing and hearing the custodian immediately talk about it create some initial intrigue. I enjoyed the unique font you used as I was able to read each title without effort which is great. This saves time for me as a reader and also not overusing the font helped it stand out as a unique element of the article. When hovering over your links, I liked seeing the additional writing, "Banor" and "Forest Guard" being some examples. These snippets of information help me see the lush environments you've created. The darker paper texture behind the written words gave a slight feeling of it being written on a piece of parchment. Lastly I enjoyed the text for "Hidden Place" as this is a great way to create more secrets and adventure hooks (weather or not that was the goal)   For constructive feedback, the image header, I enjoy when I can see the whole image at one time vs scrolling to see more of the image. The only other piece of feedback I have is when you linked a article in your article, I saw that a snippet of one of them, didn't show additional information, but when I clicked on it, it was a fully developed article. I found this under the section called "A Forgotten Ambition" the first link to the "Kingdom of Ardanida". Consider adding a draw-in statement here to continue building excitement of your world.   I hope this feedback is helpful. Thanks again for the great read. Keep up the great work!  

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that decorative borders done right are interesting and add to the article visual appeal. I want to try to find images that don't require scrolling when I can. When adding images to the article, I want to spend more time tying the image to the article right away to create intrigue and continuity. Unique fonts can be used if done properly, and snippets are very important to allow the reader to explore more of your world. I loved seeing the darker parchment paper look and I will definitely be doing something similar with my worldbuilding. Lastly, when creating sidebar content, this is a great opportunity to develop an adventure hook for readers.        

Article 8: Crying Bulb Soup

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/symbols-of-power-naelin/a/crying-bulb-soup-item  

FRESH WATER EELS

  • I really like how right as you load into the article, you're presented a common saying quote. Not only is the quote compelling, but it is accompanied by a unique border around the quote. Very creative and enticing which makes me want to continue reading.
  • I appreciate the snippets of information as you hover over "Haan Archipelago" and "societarians". These help me build context and stay investing in reading vs wondering what the words mean.
  • Knowing that the article was written by a high end chef within the world, helps me dive deeper into the culture. also it being in its own bubble is useful.
 

SALT WATER EELS

  • When I looked at the artwork of the miniature holding the bowl of soup, I could not immediately see how it added to the written article. A consideration is, if this kangaroo is indeed the high-end chef Alue, then adding a nameplate under or above his image will help the reader immediately tie the picture to the written words.
  • As I read the last paragraph, I felt the article ending abruptly. When the chef described the techniques and little tricks they have learned in their lifetime, I wanted to learn more about what some of those techniques and tricks are. I think sprinkling a few of his life's work and wisdom will ensure the article feels like the chef poured his soul into the article. (hope that made sense :D)
 

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both.   I really like how right as you load into the article, you're presented a common saying quote. Not only is the quote compelling, but it is accompanied by a unique border around the quote. Very creative and enticing which makes me want to continue reading. I appreciate the snippets of information as you hover over "Haan Archipelago" and "societarians". These help me build context and stay investing in reading vs wondering what the words could mean. Knowing that the article was written by a high-end chef within the world, helps me dive deeper into the culture. Also it being in its own bubble is useful and visually appealing.   For some constructive feedback, when I looked at the artwork of the miniature holding the bowl of soup, I could not immediately see how it added value to the written article. A consideration is, if this kangaroo is indeed the high-end chef Alue, then adding a nameplate under or above their image will help the reader immediately tie the picture to the written words. One last bit of feedback would be as I read the last paragraph, I felt the article ending abruptly. When the chef described the techniques and little tricks they have learned in their lifetime, I wanted to learn more about what some of those techniques and tricks were. I think sprinkling a few of his life's work and wisdom will ensure the article feels like the chef poured his soul into making it for others. (hope that made sense :D)   I hope this feedback is helpful. Thanks again for the great read. Keep up the great work!  

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that borders slap! around quotes and they should be simple but majestic! I think quotes are an enticing way to bring a reader into the world. The snippets function is still important and there are two different types you can choose from (even with a linked article). I've decided that making the choice of which snippet method to use will depend upon whether the reader needs a very small description or a larger source of information (small or large snippet). Having an article written by someone who lives in the world in an interesting concept and fun to read. It puts you deeper into their shoes. I will try this out and nameplates for images sometimes have their uses, so don't forget to place them as needed.        

Article 9: Summoning God Spell

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/slumbering-gods-ebelt/a/summoning-god-spell  

FRESH WATER EELS

  • I enjoyed reading the initial statement at the beginning. It gives you just enough lore to want more.
  • Great job adding article headers like effect, manifestation, source and discovery. These all did a great job of explaining more about the spell 
 

SALT WATER EELS

  • Watch for conflicting information in your article. An example of this is you talked about at the beginning of the article if the spell was used by any other person other then the High Prophet, they would die. In the next section you wrote a criteria needed in order to perform the spell. Within this criteria, you mentioned that you must be the High Prophet to preform this spell. Consider, if you still wanted people other then the High Prophet to try and cast this spell, then use language like "It is rumored that attempting to cast this spell while not the High Prophet results in immediate death" This rumor creates more intrigue as someone who is desperate may still try to activate this spell whilst knowing that death is unavoidable.
 

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both.   I really enjoyed reading the initial statement at the beginning. It gives you just enough lore to want more. Great job adding article headers like effect, manifestation, source and discovery. These all did a great job of explaining more about the spell.   One constructive feedback I have is watch for conflicting information in your article. An example of this is you talked about at the beginning of the article if the spell was used by any other person other then the High Prophet, they would die. In the next section you wrote a criteria needed in order to perform the spell. Within this criteria, you mentioned that you must be the High Prophet to preform this spell. Consider, if you still wanted people other then the High Prophet to try and cast this spell, then use language like "It is rumored that attempting to cast this spell while not the High Prophet results in immediate death" This rumor creates more intrigue as someone who is desperate may still try to activate this spell whilst knowing that death is unavoidable.   I hope this feedback is helpful. Thanks again for the great read. Keep up the great work!  

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that short and intriguing at the very beginning is absolutely important. although it is not necessary, I've come to learn that each time I open a new article I'm more prone to reading the article if an intriguing statement is at the beginning. I am also continually reminded why article headings are so important to use and that I need to ensure I'm more comfortable using them in the future. Ensure you use just the headers needed to provide enough context as in don't overdue with too many headers.    

Article 10: The Chaos Theory

  https://www.worldanvil.com/w/aeonn-lor-franken/a/the-chaos-theory-myth  

FRESH WATER EELS

  • My favorite line in the article is "but some scholars also began entertaining a thought process that didn’t involve gods, but perhaps another force." When I read this line, a lot of ideas popped into my head and I was ready to read more
 

SALT WATER EELS

  • One constructive feedback I have is find a way to sprinkle the fact that some scholars have began entertaining the thought process of another force. If you can find a way to add this idea throughout the content, I think readers will get more excited to continue reader further and diving deeper into "The Chaos Theory". One idea I'll share is make a quote from the world you can add somewhere near the beginning of the article that helps the readers realize that even if the theory is not well liked/known by the masses, we can follow the story of a few who have started to dedicate their lives to it. Just an idea.
 

Feedback Comment on Article

New Year's Resolution challenge Constructive Feedback: Although the rules said only constructive feedback, I'd like to do a little of both.   My favorite line in the article is "but some scholars also began entertaining a thought process that didn’t involve gods, but perhaps another force." When I read this line, a lot of ideas popped into my head and I was ready to read more and dive deeper into "The Chaos Theory". One constructive feedback I have is find a way to sprinkle the fact that some scholars have began entertaining the thought process of another force. If you can find a way to add this idea throughout the content, I think readers will get more excited to continue reader further and diving deeper into "The Chaos Theory". One idea I'll share is make a quote from the world you can add somewhere near the beginning of the article that helps the readers realize that even if the theory is not well liked/known by the masses, we can follow the story of a few who have started to dedicate their lives to it. Just an idea.   I hope this feedback is helpful. Thanks again for the great read. Keep up the great work!  

WHAT I LEARNED

I learned that ending with a compelling mystery is a great way to leave readers wanting more. I would say to myself, use this strategy appropriately and don't get into the habit of over using it. Leaving things open-ended does create a sense of wanting more information for better or worse. Reading other peoples articles are fun and providing feedback is something that I am comfortable with but always learning and growing to give the best of feedback that will help others grow to.          

My New Year's Resolution

  is: Take everything I learned and create articles. Each bullet point will be one task with a goal of finish all these tasks in your worldbuilding by JuneAugust 31st 2023. based on the amount of tasks, I will create the number of monthly completion points.  

Click links to see progress!

 

End of February Deadline

  • create an organization with emphasis on emblems and slogans/mottos
  • The Order of Caldari

  • Create a physical world advertisement in the fantasy world for the purpose of an adventure hook
  • The Order of Caldari

  • Create a material and tie it back to your world as much as possible 
  • Create a myth/tale and then from that myth create the books that popularized the myth
  • Try out a black background for an article
 

End of MarchJune Deadline

  • Try adding navigation to one of your articles to see if you like it
  • Add a personal bio to the bottom of all my articles (going forward)
  • Add a follow button on the top right-hand side of the article
  • Remember to be cautious not to add too many images.
  • Create an article with a compelling opening
 

End of April July Deadline

  • Try sharing your source images as your Midjourney projects
  • Create an article with a compelling motto 
  • Try adding a decorative border to your article
  • Create a new article with a unique font
  • Create an article with a darker parchment paper look 
 

End of May August Deadline

  • Create an article and use the sidebar for an adventure hook 
  • Create a border around a quote or motto in an article
  • Write an article in the perspective of a world NPC 
  • Don't forget to add nameplates as needed
  • End an article with a compelling mystery
 

End of the 2023 year Deadline

  • Link articles and add snippets as well as bold links that have not been made yet(1 article a week)

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Jan 19, 2023 02:49

Thanks for picking one of my articles and for your feedback and praise :) Best of luck with your goals! I look forward to seeing your progress

Yours truly, Nino.
Its Worldember!I am building out a spooky world, which you can read about here! (psst, its a link)
To learn about my main world click on this link! (if you want to ;) )
Jan 29, 2023 18:01 by Bryan Bolstad

Thanks. I don't know how I'm going to update progress yet, but for now I'm just going to strikethrough the milestone text and link to the article I made to work on the task.

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Jan 19, 2023 16:07 by TJ Trewin

Thank you so much for reading my article and for your thoughtful comments and feedback! Those are some useful notes and I love the sections you used for this article with the fresh & sal***er eels :D   Good luck with your goals and have an excellent and inspiring year of worldbuilding!


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Jan 19, 2023 22:38 by TJ Trewin

Haha woops, it looks like World Anvil's word filter censored something in my comment by mistake there!


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Jan 29, 2023 18:03 by Bryan Bolstad

xD. Thanks, Eel is my favorite fish to eat! Keep up the great work!

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Jan 19, 2023 23:11

Once again thank you very much for your very detailed feedback! I'd like to point out that positive feedback also counts as constructive when it's part of a longer analysis: Knowing what you did good is as important as knowing what you could improve on! so it's amazingly great that you did both.   Those are some nice resolutions that you have written down for this year. I notice you have a couple there that will require some (or a lot of) CSSing, feel free to ask for help or guidance in it! None of us do it alone :)   Best of luck for this year!

Jan 29, 2023 18:06 by Bryan Bolstad

Thanks for the info. Learning CSS will be a fun challenge and thanks for the advice! I've started looking at some of the resources on WorldAnvil.

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Jan 23, 2023 18:52 by Dani

Thank you again for the feedback! I really appreciate you took the time to go through my article and provide all that. I hope your 2023 is excellent, and that your plans for the year really come through for you!


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