Pourquoi les Étoiles ? Document in Sylâme | World Anvil

Annonce : Under relooking process

Pourquoi les Étoiles ?

Why the Stars?

 

Objectif

 
Choix de langue | Choose your language*
  Francophones English speakers
 

*English speakers, please note that I'm only starting to test to implement this method for translations. If you still see contents in French, it means either that it's still largely a WIP, or that I didn't took the time to translate it yet.

If you're looking for the word count (for exemple if my content is a challenge entry, please consider the French part as it's the one I work on before translating to English.


Type
Text, Philosophical
In response to the challenge "Unofficial Astralis challenge" by Blue Fairy 74


Cover image: Paysages d'Armiras tombant dans le crépuscule lunaire by Zannazook

Commentaires

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May 9, 2024 09:55

Congratulations on your successful participation and here is your little badge.   I really liked the concept of elemental spirits. However, I also had the feeling that the word star could easily be replaced by another word. Maybe you could work on this some more and make it clearer that they really are stars. I also liked your first person perspective for the “research study”. Perhaps you could also deepen your explanations with examples of research to better enable the reader to participate.
Astralis-Challenge 2024 by Blue Fairy 74

Stay imaginative and discover Blue´s Worlds, Elaqitan and Naharin.
May 10, 2024 14:20 by Zannazook læ Gnom

Thank you for this comment ! I'll do my best to work on those improvements. :)