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Chapter 4: Brandon - The City of Pirin

Chapter 4 Deep Dive

  Outline:
  • The cart makes it to Pirin
  • Rodrick doesn't want to (or let his sons) listen to rumors about King Roland
  • Brandon spots royal messsanger & guards
  • Rick points out buildings
  • The group waves to Rodrick's friend, Anders
  • The cart arrives at Blackburn Manor
  • Brandon sees manor for first time
  • Servants & staff greet the Hobsons
  • Brandon helps brothers unload cart
  • Rodrick sends Rick, Thomas, and Brandon to city to have fun
  • The boys in Pirin
  • Snacks & drinks!
  • Puppet show
  • Rick checks them into the Inn
  • Thomas points out Blackburn Catherdral (2nd oldest abbey)
  • Thomas & Brandon talk about school and higher learning
  • Divos' stall
  • The lads spot the theater troupe
  • Brandon and Thomas make it to the front & realize it's Ahmenebar and the Golden Apple
  • One of the women touches Brandon & asks "Tell me, young master, where will you be when King Ahmenabar is reborn?”
  • First hint of apple magic
  • Rick pulls back Brandon and Thomas
  • Brandon wants to go back to the apple & the troupe
  • Rick refuses
  • Trumpets announce Lord Blackburn's message
  • Everyone goes to the center of city & boys follow
  • Lord Blackburn delivers message from Stonehill Castle
  • Lord Blackburn suspends the spring market for 5 days
  • Rick tells Brandon they are well and truly fucked
Chapter Questions:
  • What is the theme of big idea?
  • What Happens at the Beginning of the Chapter?
  • What Happens at the Middle of the Chapter?
  • What Happens at the End of the Chapter?
  • What is the Most Important Moment of this Chapter?
  • How Does This Chapter Tie Into the Overall Story?

Plot Details

    Characters:
  • Brandon
  • Rodrick
  • Rickard
  • Thomas
  • Royal Messenger 
  • Royal Guards
  • Pirin Townspeople 
  • Lord Blackburn's Guards
  • Anders
  • Kitchen Staff
  • Shop Owners
  • Puppeteers
  • Master Divos
  • Theater Troupe
  • Lord Blackburn
  Other:
  • Apple Magic
  • Puppets
  Locations:
  • Outskirts of Pirin
  • Pirin city gates
  • Pirin
  • Road to Blackburn Manor
  • Blackburn Manor
  • Blackburn Manor - Kitchen
  • Pirin shops
  • Pirin Square w/ Puppets
  • Pirin Inn
  • Blackburn Cathedral 
  • Divos' stall
  • Pirin Square w/ Theater Troupe
  • Piriin city center/square

Chapter Details

  • # of Pages: 15
  • # of Words: 3,149
  • Reading Level: 5
  • Time Frame: 04/16/1510

Mood Boards

Timeline

 
  • 4/16/1510 - Spring Market suspended due to Roland's injury

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