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Jul 26, 2020 09:24

I like this! The sense of urgency in with the Churiss Authorities is palpable and I love the list of punishable acts :)

Jul 26, 2020 12:46

Thank you - I was thinking they may use the Reservists military unit for the job, but I'd don't think there'd be much left afterwards if they were sent in! Thanks again - we are now in the final leg of summer camp! :)

Jul 27, 2020 06:30 by Wendy Vlemings (Rynn19)

These guys are brutal. It feel like they are fighting a losing battle, or at least that they fear they might be losing grip. Another great article.

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Jul 27, 2020 23:22

Thank you! They are brutal and when folks that carry out the punishments are spoken to, they generally show no remorse for what they do. Thanks again :)

Jul 27, 2020 08:39 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Yikes. I think the punishable offence that stood out to me was 'being a family member of a serious offender.' This group definitely feel like they are desperately trying to cling onto power by fear.

Emy x
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Jul 27, 2020 23:24

Thank you! You're right - it's all about power and implicitly threatening family members is another weapon in their arsenal. :)