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THEMES: Redemption arc, good vs evil
GENRE: Fantasy Romance Dystopian Sci fi
Astrid wants to rescue things that are old to make them new again. Astrid is a demon that’s a human who wants to be a healer and humanoids she collects mechanical parts.
Macklin the King makes an evil humanoid and tries to take down the non-humans and the robots that are created but the evil humanoid wants to turn on King Macklin.
Humanoids are controlled by King Macklin humanoids making the good humanoids do bad things that they wouldn’t do. King Macklin of Kingdom of Cimmerian makes an evil robot army.
Astrid rescues the humanoid that sends her messages through voices in her head. There is a new town where Astrid made in the evil town that is a hidden town.
What do we expect: there is something that you should expect is that there is a redemption arc with the main character Astrid.
list of names
]Astrid: The main character is a demon
Reign: Astrid's best friend that
Lucid: Astrid's best friend
Bramble: Astrid's brother
Mauve: The character she meets that is her sister
Story: The romantic character of Astrid
Macklin: The antagonist who lives in the kingdom.
Blue Echo: The Drug that Astrid uses.
Study Latte: Is a Cafe and a bookstore library all together.
Scorpio Hell: This is a place where people that are supernatural are sent to.
ACT ONE
save the supernatural beings and save Astrid from addiction
(0-1%) Opening Image
Astrid’s journal entry a crime to get drugs. Astrid seeking for someone
INTRO EMENY
the king of Kingdom of Cimmerian King Macklinis testing the people to see if they are human he is seen torturing the back of wemons backs
INTRO SITUATION
the intro situation is a dairy entry then after the diary entry that is when the testing begins. there is a fight in the testing room where Astrid is.
Later in the book there is a battle between the humans from the kingdom and the supernatural people.
ACT TWO
(single scene) Break into 2
Figure out new world and figure out hobby
Astrid and the rest of the crew find their new home but they have some encounters with some people.
the encounters are with the letters and threats that the Kingdom of Cimmerian leaves and Astrid meets some important people.
The adventure of figuring out Astrid's Powers and the start of humanoids.
The setup with Astrid starting to build humanoids
(single scene) Break into 2
Figure out new world and figure out hobby
B story
Romance between Astrid and unknown character new character that magical like she is
War is coming
All is lost
Astrid is defeated and gives up breaking down that she’s a throw away because she fails at everything- drugs and humanoids
Darknight of the Soul
Addiction - she has a heart-to-heart with someone
Put clues together about new place
Reaction to the kingdom's evil plan and action
FIRST ATTEMPT
Fun and Games
New world camp non human she starts saving humanoids a fight between humans and non-human
drug spiral
Fun and Games
New world camp non human she starts saving humanoids a fight between humans and non-human
drug spiral
Midpoint
False victory: breaking out the non-humans like that will end everything
Raise the stakes: she will lose everything and everyone
A and B Collide: romance drugs and Kingdom collide New Family
FALSE VICTORY:
ACT 3
FALSE ENDING
Break into three (aha moment)
Realizing that she needs to stop drugs and knowing she needs to help and need help to take town the kingdom down
knowing more on humanoids
Astrid is all alone and the army of the kingdom captures her and leaves the group a note as they do as their signature.
MIDPOINT
False victory: breaking out the non-humans like that will end everything
Raise the stakes: she will lose everything and everyone
FINAL SHOWDOWN
Break into three (aha moment)
Realizing that she needs to stop drugs and knowing she needs to help and need help to take town the kingdom down
knowing more on humanoids
- The new friends are together New town
- They set a plan and make the plan in action as they go into the kingdom
- There is a twist here figure out later
- A high stakes debate insert
- The group of people make a new plan to save the non-human world and to stay hidden as they do not want to fight they want to make peace in the world
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