Everything Wrong with RWBY Part 6 (Show, don't Tell)
A Philosophy of Showing Rather than Telling Which Does Not Always Require Flashbacks, Expenses, Etc.
This would be a suggestion/hope I have for RWBY's writing decisions in the future. It has to do with a core complaint of the series, which was also adressed by the showrunners' most recent AMA here:
Three things that we think we can improve on: 1) More fights that better utilize characters' weapons and abilities. 2) More attention and meaningful conflicts for Ruby 3) Show don't tell.
The adage of "show don't tell" is something I'm sure most people are familiar with, and it gets thrown around here a lot for mainly legitimate reasons.
But I was hoping that this thread could be a place for RWBY's audience to bring up examples from the show where we were "told" something, and instead suggest ways in which it could have been "shown".
A common suggestion is to, instead of having scenes where a person talks about things that happened in their past, actually go back and show those events happening. This sort of criticism has been levvied repeatedly against Blake-scenes in Menagerie, and for the most part I agree with the stance.
But I wanted to bring up the idea that showing rather than telling doesn't always necessitate things like flashbacks, which are an additional expense for the production. Sometimes just simple structuring of dialogue can change a lot.
Example of "telling":
This line, which I consider one of the most blatant offenders of volume 5.
Ren: A common philosophy is that a warrior’s Semblance is a part of who they are. Some say your personality and character can define your Semblance while some claim that it is the other way around. Of course, there are still many who don’t see a connection at all.
First of all, it's fairly meaningless exposition. "Semblance is either influenced by your personality, influences your personality, or there is no connection between your semblance and personality." Very informative.
The only tidbit we actually learn from that whole segment is that there is disagreement in society regarding how semblances operate. But it's shoveled in our face without much character or relevance.
Suggestion for "showing":
Pretty simple change really, if there is general academic disagreement on the topic, have some of the characters believe in different stances and disagree with each other. That way this brief exchange becomes about enriching the characters by giving them opinions. I.e something like:
- I believe X originates from this.
- Nah, my parents told me it was the other way around.
- You're both being superstitious, there's no proven connection at all!
- Long story short, nobody knows for sure.
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