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Settlement
World
Yonderverse
Author
Mochimanoban
Publication Date
17 Feb, 2022
Creation Date
17 Feb, 2022
Last Update Date
1 Sep, 2024
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410
Favorites
12
Comments
3
Work In Progress
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Eternal Sage Kefkejaco
Feb 17, 2022 18:05

Nice settlement and map! Quite like the surrounding landscape of the calderas and the use of the water around to deter dragons.   As for your first map I think you did a good job so no need to stress too much about it ^^ You could add more details to it such as using the same ground but darker to show where people tend to walk most of the time to create some form of road. But in general it looks good :)

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Councilor of the Inner Sanctum Mochimanoban
Feb 17, 2022 18:43 by Mochi

I'm glad you thought the map was alright! I'd love to add roads and things like that, but I don't think I can with the free version - the ground I used was the darkest I could find. But thank you for the suggestions, I am considering Inkarnate Pro so you might see an update soon :P

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Eternal Sage Kefkejaco
Feb 17, 2022 19:55

ooh that could be true, I have the pro and for creating a 'road' effect I use the brightness tool of the same ground type so perhaps that is something you can't do in the free version :p

Feel free to check my new world Terra Occidentalis if you want to see what I am up to!
Eternal Sage Michael Chandra
Feb 20, 2022 16:50 by Michael Chandra

I really like the map here! And the reason for lots of water is quite understandable. o,o   I think that with some of the details being relatively narrow, a 2-wide + 1-wide (possibly mixed with 1-wide + 2-wide) column structure in the full footer might be nice near the end.

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Councilor of the Inner Sanctum Mochimanoban
Feb 22, 2022 21:41 by Mochi

Glad you like the map! Not quite sure what you mean by the width, but I'll try and do what I can :)

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Eternal Sage Michael Chandra
Feb 22, 2022 21:55 by Michael Chandra

It's the most-default trick I use when styling my own stuff, varied-width columns with containers.

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Venerable Grandmaster Ononomad
Feb 22, 2022 20:20 by Tim Day

Great concept, and I dig the map too. I really love the water catapults and use of the lakes and rivers as defence. Keen to know more about the matokale and how their customs are shaped by mining, and constant threat of the dragons.

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Councilor of the Inner Sanctum Mochimanoban
Feb 22, 2022 21:42 by Mochi

Thank you so much for liking the article and taking the time to comment! I'll definitely be writing an article on the matokale at some point, not sure when though xD

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