A Tale of Sug'Dukht and Av'Ril

Long ago, before the Sun's children rained down Ayonerra, lived two wicked races. Malak’his, with blinding halos and twisted wings, and Shed’genenis - with flesh-piercing horns and crooked tails. Each mocked the other, deeming their own race above all. Thousands of battles were waged and thousands of kin’s blood was spilled. 

One such clash seemed like any other. Malak’hi commander Av’Ril led the charge, shattering opponent’s horns and sparing none. But one soldier stood toe to toe with the commander. As their weapons shot sparks upon each strike, curiosity won over and Av’Ril asked her name. 

Sug’Dukht.

For six days and six nights the two sparred. And at the end of the sixth night, the two laid together. 


Blinded by love, Sug’Dukht put away her blood purity, the waging war, and dreamt of fleeing with Av’Ril. 
Blinded by shame, Av’Ril promised Sug’Dukht he’d scout the lands and return once it was safe.
All she needed to do was wait.

But the wretched liar confessed to malak'hi King Ahog’Reon. Tears flowed as he begged for forgiveness, told where he left Sug’Dukht, and sought to mend his mistake. But a single slash silenced the betrayer, and Av’Ril’s head rolled away from the disgusted king.

The sound of wings alerted Sug’Dukht. With joy, she looked up to meet her love. But joy turned to dread when malak’hi soldiers covered the sky. Sug’Dukht ran until her feet turned sore and bloody. She reunited with her clan and with renewed spirit battled Av’Ril’s kin.

And during the Month of Dekabura, our Messiah was born. 






Cover image: by Nincho

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Oct 7, 2024 10:29 by CoolG

Omg I love this so much <3

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Oct 7, 2024 10:47

Thank you!

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Oct 7, 2024 17:03 by Aster Blackwell

smh men are useless

Oct 7, 2024 19:20

smh Av'Ril's head

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Oct 8, 2024 00:25 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

Throw the whole man away. Or at least his head.   Poor Sug'Dukht. I hope she was happy after these events, at least.

Emy x
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Oct 8, 2024 06:37

Toss it like a rugby ball!

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Nov 1, 2024 14:55

Wonderful sad story - I really love the writing style, which is reminiscent of old legends about heroes and gods from ancient worlds.

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Nov 1, 2024 17:25

Thank you! Glad the style came through!

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