Hinall
The heart of the lumber industry in Edrea
“You know, Hinall, the lumbering town?” Farrah said, Zuree still didn’t indicate didn’t indicate that she recognized the name, “the one that supplies most of Bechlea with its wood?”Hinall is the single most important wood supplier in the entirety of The Kingdom of Edrea and it's estimated that the town delivers up to 15 percent of all used wood in Edrea. Hinall delivers up to 80 percent of the wood used in Bechlea.
In the last hundred years or so, Hinall's defenses were reinforced. This detered many Iwachi raiders from targeting the town.
The citizens of Hinall are not fond of the Iwachi. They’re pretty close to the mountain pass and have been raided multiple times over the last few years.
The new line of defence
Hinall used to be raided quite a bit. The general attitude about it was "oh that sure is unfortunate, but we cannot do anything about it". But soon the attacks increased and everyone just had enough. The town leaders went to the king to get financial support and soon Hinall had a wall as well as a few trusty cannons. Professional guards were trained and stationed at every road into the town as well as near the weak spots north of the town.
Being shot at with canon balls is a pretty good motivation to find a new place to raid. After a few instances of raiders being shot after, it seemed like most got the message and the attacks became scarce.
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That was a really nice article to read! I really like your writing style, is nice and easy to read, and it has a good flow to it. The beautiful drawings also really help. I saw on the map that Hinall is really close to the sea. Do they transport their exports through the sea or through the land? Another thing that I was left wondering is what types of trees do they plant and grow for wood. I thought the initial quote was a bit difficult to read. I'm not sure if this will help, but I think something like this may be easier to read: "Hinall, you know, the lumbering town." Farrah said, but Zuree still didn’t indicate that she recognized the name/town, “the one that supplies most of Bechlea with its wood?”
Thank you for taking the time to read the article! It means a lot :D I will try and look into the quote during tomorrow, I can see how it's a little meh :D Thank you so much for the feedback MGatta ^-^