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Odele "Pirouette" Livádiborn

 
Water is jealous of her fluidity, while magic is entranced.
— Farah Styles, Dancer

Humble Beginnings

  She was born in the Isychia Valley as Odele Livádiborn. She had demonstrated an unusual aptitude for dancing, to the point where she was able to rouse or quell magic. She seems to have a connection to the shards of magic, or Wild Magic Fragments as the scholars call them. She quickly earned some level of notoriety throughout her home valley first for her skill and then for how she could gracefully manipulate the magics around her. With her confidence so emboldened by her local fame, it wasn't long before she desired to turn her dream of performing in the great cities of the continent into reality. To perform the shows she instinctively knew only she could perform. Little did she know that her gift would save a town.

 
Her dancing is magical. No, really...
— Steve Grassroot, Farmer
 

Rise to Fame

  She began her travels to the port towns of the Occulus Sea, her stay at the Port Town of Espelhar being unexpectedly eventful. During her performance there, her usual performance of a water dance, a wild Magic Storm unexpectedly arose. Performing with a large gathering outside the town's protective shield, it seemed as if the unfortunate audience and performers were not going to make it until the storm quieted suddenly. Odele had continued to dance (perhaps more energetically once she sighted the storm), and had managed to dispel the storm before it could harm the audience. The people of Espelhar began to call her "Pirouette" after one of the motions she used to calm the storm. It was also shortly after this event that she met the first member and friend, Farah Styles, of what would become Pirouette's Troupe.   It was in the Avistrian capital of Guateque where she embraced the name "Pirouette", partly because she couldn't get away from it, and so named the traveling troupe she is known for. Pirouette's Troupe began to perform ever more extravagant shows in places like the Free City of Centrum, the Silver City of Luna, and the Radiant City of Sol. The highlight of every show was Odele and her dance performances that usually, but not always, involved the summoning and dispelling of a small but controlled magic storm (water being favored by Odele). But it wasn't in the royal halls of Luna or Sol where she earned a place among legends, but in a town in the middle of a desert.

 
They say that dancing with magic is dangerous, and I suppose they're right. It adds a sense of danger to my performance which, admittedly, I enjoy.
— Odele Livádiborn
 

Into Legend

  Odele decided that she would take a break from touring the great cities of the continent and to return to her home valley which she hadn't seen in years. Along the way, she and her troupe stopped at the Garden Town of Oazė for what was supposed to be a quiet day or two as they replenished their supplies for the westward journey. Plans changed when the townsfolk, who had heard of but never seen Odele perform, approached her with an offer which she graciously agreed to. The performance would be a standard affair for her, but things quickly changed as a storm of roiling dust and frantic lightning approached the town. It was after her performance that the storm finally crashed against the town's protective Schutz Field.   Magic storms had been seen by the town before, but none so violent and long lasting. It had been four days since the storm's arrival before the town turned to Odele to do something about it, but Odele was afraid for she had never tamed something quite like before. On the sixth day, she drew up enough courage to face the storm outside of the city's protective shield. When day had turned to night and night back to day the town had feared the storm had taken the famous dancer. By noon, the storm did something unexpected. It not only calmed but seemed to have become much less violent and more playful. A light Rain began as it retreated from the city's magic barrier and then dissipated and dispersed. Watching the rain falling from above, Odele knew that she had just given the greatest performance of her life.

Species
Year of Birth
1249 AGC 28 Years old
Children
Current Residence
Isychia Valley
Pronouns
she/her
Gender
female
Eyes
Blue and Green, maybe sparkling
Hair
Dark blonde

Combative Dances?

  Some may wonder if Odele ever used her talents in a combative capacity. While a detailed record has yet to be written of the great dancer going into battle, it is a wonder that her troupe seems to never run into ill fortune by way of highway robbers, monster attack, or the like. That is, they never seem to lose a thing when traveling. It is entirely possible that Odele has used her skills to at least discourage attempts against her troupe.


Note(s) from the Archivists:

  Are you going to take those dance lessons now Edward? - Archivist Enna   Not really. - Archivist Edward   Bob? - Archivist Enna   I'm good. - Archivist Bob   I wrote an article about a dancer that can control storms, and you still won't learn how to dance? - Archivist Enna   Yes. - Archivist Edward   Yes. - Archivist Bob

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Feb 9, 2022 10:12

Oh magic through dancing is a pretty cool concept! Was a nice read and interesting how she managed to keep out of hand storms at bay time and time again. Is there something causing these magic storms to appear more frequently and larger?

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Feb 11, 2022 01:12 by Starfarer Theta

Thanks for the kind comment!   The storms are caused by fragments of wild magic and so are usually random. However, around Odele they do seem to get stronger. Perhaps her connection with the fragments has an upside and a downside.

Feb 9, 2022 14:41 by Amélie I. S. Debruyne

Nice article! I love the idea of calling and controlling storms through dance :D When you mentioned desert, I was expecting her to get rain so that people could replenish their water supply. Did that also happened/was that one of the motivation for the people asking her to perform her dance?

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Feb 11, 2022 01:15 by Starfarer Theta

Thank you!   The storm in question actually desiccated things it touched, so the water supply was decreasing. Maybe this won't be added while the competition is still running, but I think Odele's dance would have caused the storm to return the water it took.

Feb 11, 2022 01:17 by Starfarer Theta

Of course, I just realized the judging period is a few days away from when I posted that comment.

Feb 11, 2022 07:55 by Amélie I. S. Debruyne

If you want to add anything, we have until Saturday 7pm GMT to do so :D And after that it's one week of "light edits" (i.e. fixing typos and fix like that).

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Feb 9, 2022 18:02

I enjoyed the read. Magic through dance is a fun way to interact with the natural/magical world. I think in you note form the archivists section you meant for the first response to come from Edward, to whom the question was posed, as opposed to Bob answering twice.   I also like the ambiguity of whether she has used the dances offensively, as it does seem like the fluidity of dancing would allow for it, but maybe she wants it kept secret as it is her art and she wants it known for helping people, not hurting others even if in self defense.

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Feb 9, 2022 18:03

The addition of some artwork of Odele would add a lot to the article, but it stands well enough without it.

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Feb 11, 2022 01:19 by Starfarer Theta

Thanks for both comments!   Especially for pointing out the double Bob. One Bob is enough for the Guild. As for the artwork, will take a look around and see if maybe I could find something or make something.

Feb 10, 2022 13:23

I agree with Kefkejaco it would be interesting to know if the magical storms had increased in frequency during Odele's life, but magically infused dancing is a great idea.   I also liked the suggestion in the panel that she possibly used it in combat, that was a nice little detail and teaser for other things.


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Feb 11, 2022 01:20 by Starfarer Theta

Thank you!   Magic storms have not increased in frequency world-wide, but it seems that it has around Odele as her connection with wild magic fragments increases.

Feb 15, 2022 19:14 by Dr Emily Vair-Turnbull

I love the idea of dancing magic and being able to control the weather through it! Also, poor Enna - she just wants Bob and Edward to learn to dance!

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Feb 19, 2022 02:27 by Starfarer Theta

Thanks! Enna wishes a lot of good for people.

Feb 17, 2022 19:52 by George Sanders

I enjoyed the quotes and side bar story that added how people viewed her in the world. "Water is jealous of her fluidity" that is a fun line. Entertainer to the storms even.

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Feb 19, 2022 02:28 by Starfarer Theta

Glad you enjoyed the quotes! I like "entertainer to the storms." :)

Feb 18, 2022 04:15

I really like your quotes throughout, and as always, I love the conversation between the archivists. This is a very unique bard entry, which I think is great

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Feb 19, 2022 02:28 by Starfarer Theta

Thank you for the kind comment. :)