Kalyus the Great
The Great Kalyus Longstien
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"He is a great ruler. He helps everyone and has treated me kindly when I am in his presence. There is no need to worry any more mother; I am safe again."
Physical Description
Body Features
Magic Features
Signifying his magic, Kalyus' only blemish on his skin is an Iron Mark, signifying his capabilities in Iron Magic. In his possession, and almost always attached at his hip, the Iron Relic was transformed into a sword that allowed Kalyus to amplify his magic. It is always seen in his portraits and he was famously known for his possession of the Iron Relic that was named to by Kalyus' Sword in its form Considering his skills a Mage, Kalyus is capable of all forms of Iron and Earth manipulation. He is known for his skills in crafting weapons and bending blades(or arrows) away from him in battle. Though never perfectly captured in a piece, there are mentions of it in literature and some artworks hint at this capability.Mental characteristics
Personal history
"I will be king. Not because I want to, but because none of you have proved yourself worthy. Each of you has tried to kill another for power, and I don't wish to see this empire fall to another tyrant."
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View Early LifeEarly Life
Education
Young Adulthood and Early Adulthood
Rise to Power
Fall
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. This allowed the Storm Marked Mage to overpower Kalyus. His death was avenged however as the invaders lost the battle.Legacy
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to control provinces allowing the king to rule over all of the empire, despite its size. With that, Kalyus had no children and the Yxouram, an assistant to the throne of the king and the king's Yawiyxc, was in an interim point, leaving the throne to be fought over just as he had received it himself.Gender Identity
Sexuality
Accomplishments & Achievements
"I am not a great king. I am simply raising the standards."As a general, Kalyus was known for his ability to command. Under his leadership, the previously struggling, but powerful, Mage Division rose to be the most powerful division of the Lypain Empire's army and, quite possibly, the whole of the North and South. He was able to lead several charges into battle and never knew defeat as a general. Furthermore, Kalyus is known for saving a whole squad of soldiers, mages and regular, without aid in the middle of a war. Each marks a well-known accomplishment, though Kalyus had many less known accomplishments. Becoming the King of the Lypian Empire was an accomplishment in of itself, however, it lead to some of Kalyus' most prolific achievements. Under his rule, the empire grew to be more prosperous than ever before, while easily surpassing all other empires throughout all of time. His in battle achievements continued as well, as during a variety of sieges and wars Kalyus was able to lead with an unprecedented victory rate. His final, and most impactful, accomplishment was that Kalyus lead the Lypian Empire to conquer the whole of the North without horrible amounts of bloodshed. This impacted many of the people his empire, and is, by far, his most notable accomplishment. Following the conquering of the North, Kalyus was also able to restructure the government power hierarchy, though he died before completing it. While holding the throne, Kalyus was also known for creating a more widespread religion, though it is more often considered to be a philosophy as it doesn't show a god being all-powerful. Even so, Kalyus' impact spread far across his rule as king and general, leaving a massive mark on the whole of the Lypian Empire.
"Kalyus is likely the greatest king that has ever lived in the North. He built the Lypian Empire up to what it is today."
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Failures & Embarrassments
Morality & Philosophy
Personality Characteristics
Motivation
"I don't wish to expand the empire for the empire; I seek to expand the empire for the people."
Social
Social Aptitude
Relationships
Kalyus is known for never being able to hold down a relationship during his reign as general and king. The exact reasons are unknown, though it is thought that it was due to Kalyus devoting his life to helping those around him instead of spending time on each individual. He had two girlfriends during his first five years as king, though neither lasted more than a single month."My time has come, but you must save yourself, and this empire, with your life; please carry on my legacy and save our great empire."
"It's not my past that matters anymore; we must first concern ourselves with the future we share."
"I hope to improve our military. I wish to make it a better place than it was when I was a child."
"I may have begun as a General, but by the end of this I hope you see me as a friend as well."
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Whilst this is still a WIP, it already gives a good idea of what is genuinely good man. The quotes from unknown folk work really nicely as testimonials are a really nice way of showing the reader what the people he ruled over thought of him. I look forward to seeing this when it's finished!
Thanks so much! I'll let you know when I have a solid rewrite done. Hopefully this weekend.