Welcome to Dark Lord Seduction Plan! In a world torn by a conflict between the Light and the Dark, Dark mage Alina only cares about seducing the Dark Lord and getting him to marry her... Come read about her plans, and the world where she lives!
Introduction to the story | Alina | Runic magic | Novel upcoming
I have to wonder how reliable this narrator is... Is this the sort of narrator who would consider rituals to be among those "perfectly safe and normal" activities being "overregulated"? Or is Light Society truly trying to ban things like petting puppies?
I like how this frames the cultural identity in relation to differing identities. Once a group becomes ubiquitous, there's no longer any meaning derived from being a member of that group. It's a different take on the prompt than I've seen most others write about :)
Alina regularly practices rituals and indeed find them perfectly safe and normal :p - I've been trying to do a mix of justified concern and over-bearing laws so that you can't easily say that my Light or Dark mages are in the right, but Alina is definitely not unbiased with her opinion XD
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I love the idea of light and dark as not these... vague moral alignments, but rather political parties with espoused and lived ideals that don't necessarily match up. Also, I love the formatting on your article! Was a very fun visual read.
Thanks! I've been having a lot of fun coming up with alternative way to present the worldbuilding info to make it more entertaining :D
I love playing with the concept of Light and Dark magic and politics and not having the concept so easily be broken down between good and evil, it makes things more fun :p
The way Alina talks about the loss of culture due to everyone being Light makes me think of my own family's assimilation into American society and our resulting loss of culture. I really appreciate how you present the two sides--I can rationality in both (though a lot of people on both sides sound like people I wouldn't get on with.)
Also, I cannot get enough of Alina's disdain for "games."
Thanks for your comment :D I didn't think about immigrant integration when writing this (more about counter culture or a subculture suddenly becoming mainstream), but it's a good point! My father's side of the family are also immigrant (from Poland to France), but with my generation we've lost all link to Polish culture and language :(
I'm glad I've done a good job showing that they are no good or evil side in this world :p
And since this is the last comment of yours that I'm answering to, I really wanted to say thanks a lot for all the reading and commenting you've been doing in this world in July and August! This was super nice of you to do and I was super happy and motivated to see all the notifications and comments <3
Reading this right after the "Dark Society" article. You definitely have to join the light side and change them from the inside! Right! That's the only choice! Right? (These guys sound like a-holes too! You're cutting me to shreds with how close this is to real politics nowadays!)
Thanks! I'm trying to not refer to any modern politics because with fantasy you can easily find yourself saying things you don't mean at all XD But I think there are a lot of common elements shared by politicians that makes any such problems very relatable.
The whole concept have this world is to have fun being on the "evil" side - I'd say for once, but that might be something I'm doing a bit too often in all my worlds and novels XD
They definitely do sound like big hypocrites, and definitely not as good as they claim to be.
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It's always the problem with mages who claim to be "good" and "Light"... :(