The Networkers' Web
A big (Perhaps gigantic, as the depths of the Weaver's Network sources is difficult to scrutinise) amount of groups and people are allied, one way or another, to the Weaver's Network.
However, as a key part of their functionality lies in their manpower not being really sure about who are they working for, these organisations have only passing ideas as to the ends and beneficiaries of their work. While the Weavers hold an strict silence about their connections and contacts, less meticulous parties have shared information that, little by little, added up to form a fairly big (albeit highly speculative) picture of the Weaver's alliances with the big and small factions around the archipelago. Attentive chroniclers may even elaborate on the delicate relations that the small factions of rebels and outlaws formed with each other by their workings with the Weavers, even between groups of people that don't really have a clue about each other's identities.
The Web
The Weaver's Network
I hold the contact book. I will get you who you need.Every task, every name, and every juicy detail about thousands of people's machinations runs through them but, like an illicit confessor, nothing comes out of their mouths and pens -- save for the very short, very direct requests they send to their "processors". The people and groups allied to them know that they are working all the time for who-knows-whoms. The common leatherworker can only wonder and speculate whether the package she wrapped in non-flammable wraps will help The Bakers overthrown the deer's tyranny, or cause their demise. She will have to find solace in the Weaver's general history of favouring the ones that are fighting up instead of down.
Raised Bakers' Resistance of Karte
I fight for my land and my people. My land and my people are on my side.The Raised Bakers Resistance, the organisation of anarchist labourers working to overthrown Karte's monarchy, does not only have funny pastry names under their account. They are well organised and hold a good amount of information on their own. There is basically no doubt that half of the work done for The Resistance went through the hands of the Weavers, but also that the bakers provided food, safe passages and gear to the Weavers and their other clients. In exchange, the Resistance turns more of their usual share of blind-eye when they suspect a work is being done for the deer nobility.
Temple of Rheshnaghty
I use the gift of intention to consciously improve the world.Few people have a history so publicly linked to The Weavers as the followers of Autonomism's god of Intention, Rheshnaghty. Lush Enis, a priestess of Rheshnaghty, was loved in her community for the gigantic amount of work she did and got done to help everyone around her and make her town flourish thanks to her work as a Weaver. However, by doing this as an example of her (unpopular at the time) version of Rheshnaghty's gift of intention, and by obviously getting the common folk to get around levy and unfair regulations, she got on the bad side of both the other priests, and Dhalmain's government. She was assassinated on 2965 E.Alz making her the first and only person to be executed for the charges of "weaving contacts", but the backslash was so great that Rheshnaghty's temple was forever changed to follow her teachings. Today, it is an open secret that a lot of the most devote followers and preachers of The Intention are either weavers, or active helpers for them.
The Circlecrats
The gods gave us hands but not shame.The Principality of Red Crest used to be quite an uptight and distrusting society, at least in public, before the High Rust dissolved their mother country, the kingdom of Merthiorn into oblivion, leaving the prince sitting on a throne crumbling under the weight of his unpopularity. Getting help to do less-than-perfectly-legal-and-regulated work done there was difficult, so the Weavers had to fight taxation, bureaucracy and fear on top of their usual difficulties. Far from being just a group of loud philosophers, the Circlecrats of Red Crest pushed their own political agenda against the government's idea of morality and decency, and against the tight regulations and restrictions that made individual progress complex for the poorer folk. They had their questions about the ethics of the Weavers, but they agreed that, in their context, helping them would be the ethically correct decision. But being "not just a group of loud philosophers" didn't stop them from still being loud. They made their alliance with the Weavers public, which diminished the Weavers' ability to make use of that alliance and still act in secrecy, and made them distrust the philosophers. The relationship still proved useful as the Circlecrat were the most willing subjects most of the time, and their members usually knew a variety of trades.
The Knowledgeholders
I have information, the most valuable resource.Sometimes, the tasks entrusted to the weavers requires not so much of manual labour and direct action, and more of getting the right people to retrieve the right knowledge. And sometimes, those who hoard knowledge require manual labour and direct action to... well, to retrieve the knowledge, and to make it apt to be stored.
The Knowledgeholders are a small group of people appointed by the Kingdom of Merthiorn to gather and manage research, history, biographies, and tomes of any kind of useful information in the Majestic Library of Goldwaste.
Over their years of work, they managed to gather an incredible amount of books and manuscripts, which access was supposedly public, but required going through an excruciating amount of bureaucracy.
It was suspected that the Knowledgeholders made use of less-than-official channels and procedures to meet their quotas of new books, and it was rumoured that getting a Weaver in place could make the access to the records a lot easier, but nothing was confirmed. With the coming of the High Rust and the subsequent dissolution of Merthiorn and destruction of most of Goldwaste, the newly raised Kingdom of Tháur reinstated the Knowledgeholders, making their priority the management of the efforts to retrieve what was left of the contents of the Majestic Library from its remote location. After this point, their connection to the weavers became more obvious, as the tasks diversified and the work was harder, and academic content in general became more difficult to find across the archipelago, making the kind of jobs that required finding information more common. In the desire to impose Thaur as the academic capital of the archipelago, the authorities turn a blind eye to this sometimes evident connections.
Dhalmain's Underfolk
I know the secret places, I know the secret routes.The fact that the Weavers Network count common scoundrels and criminals between their resources surprises none but the most naive people, and is usually the excuse used by people in power to criminalise their activities and dissuade the population from engaging with them. "Yeah but do they have to?" is the most usual question in discussions about this.
The Weavers themselves would not let out any sort of public announcement on the topic, of course, but those that are most aware of the order's philosophy have been able to conjure a simple answer: If the order's purpose is to make common people be able to use the resources normally available only to the powerful, then the criminals have to be part of that array of resources.
The odds between the powerful and the common folk are still uneven in this regard, as it is known that the Weavers' order usually refuses requests that they deem too violent or dangerous, though their record is far from spotless. On the Underfolk's side, this alliance, perhaps the most reliable that they have, provides work that is safer than most of what they can get. After all, "Get a thing from point A to point B" is much easier when the thing is just a love letter for some fugitive that is expecting it.
However, individual issues between a weaver and one of the underfolk are not unheard of, and threats and violence ensued in several opportunities. Still, the weights on the balance still work in favour of the alliance being kept strong.
The Nation of Ruh
Our laws and traditions aren't a popularity contest. A ruler that tries to bend on their favour will soon find themselves bent.While a lot of individual towns consider the weavers as troublemakers, bad influence and potentially dangerous, Ruh is the only one of the big islands of the archipelago where the Weavers' Network is not outlawed. RuhRics, specially those of Cyan Stone City, have long stated that the outlawing of the Weavers is a tool of the more centralised governments of kingdoms and proper countries to prevent losing control over their subjects. Several notorious "charismatic helpers" are counted among the towns that form the Nation of Ruh, and sometimes their help is required in a somewhat public fashion for important issues in the communities, making their job a little different to the more individualised work they usually perform in the rest of the archipelago. The cultural perception of the weavers is, however, a different issue altogether. The legality of their profession does not make them immune to the perception that their work sometimes will require them to engage with dangerous people or make them enemies of the powerful and of those who want to eliminate "those who know too much", so, while the people of Ruh usually don't have much of a problem with Weavers, and are probably grateful when they suspect they have one on their community, they heavily discourage others from joining the network.
I'm going to be as detailed as I can as the grammar here is a bit difficult to understand properly in a few places. However, The article does do well as the beginning of your entry to the Alliance Challenge. --
Technically, all organizations in controll of land have their share of control. Saying "If there is a single organization that has more than its fair share of control over the Haan Archipelago" or "If any organization were to have complete control over the Haan Archipelago" both suggest that the Networker's web has a lot of control in a more direct way. You need a sentence end in there. The whole of this sentence is a paragraph. I'd suggest the first division to be "Weaver's Network: a group of..." Other than that, most of the sentence is necessary, if not long. This is a bit wrong in ordering, placing the subject in the wrong place. Likely a side effect of languages. "they would accomplish very little if they weren't true to their name." Probably use a semicolon there as the information that follows makes a bit of a run on sentence. Implimenting the previous notes, here's the re-written sentence: "However, they would accomplish very little if they weren't true to their name; all of their power to take action come from a tight-knit web of contacts strung along by the ties of safekeeping secrets, the prospect of work, and gratitude." Some things might be slightly off from your original meaning as I had to guess at a few things. English terminology forthcoming: You begin the sentence as "A big, perhaps gigantic" which suggests that the latter part of the sentence is an appositive(fancy word). To fix this, it should read as "A big, perhaps gigantic as few know the depths of sources at the disposal of the Weaver's Network, amount of groups and people are allied, in one way or another, to the Weaver's Network" I'm not sure how important this part is; you could probably remove it. I'd mix this with the previous sentence to say something like "Those that work for the Network rarely know it, a key part of the functionality as the secrecy allows for the Network to work in the shadows." This part is called an appositive. Generally, you will put commas either side of it to make the sentence flow smoother. This part makes a run-on sentence. I'd suggest moving it into its own sentence and reformatting as necessary. These subtitles/mottos seem like they may be better fit in a [quote] block. There are some punctuation errors: "I hold the contact book. I will get you who you need. Every work, every name, and every juicy detail about thousands of people's machinations runs through them but, like an illegal confessor, nothing comes out of their mouths and pens -- save for the very short, very direct requests they send to their "processors". " I might consider making this a new paragraph as it's different from the rest of the paragraph You don't need the comma This doesn't need a new paragraph. -- Sorry. This is a lot of information to comb through; the examples I provide are more so suggestions and demonstrations. It's often easier to demonstrate than explain advanced concepts. There might be a few other things that could change, but you have a really strong foundation for the article and the grammar is pretty good considering I've seen native English speakers do worse.Thank you SO MUCH for your very detailed corrections suggestions. I have implemented them right away while I work on the rest of the article (Formatting for the mottos will be done later :p). Your help is very valuable and I hope I can avoid these errors in the rest of the article! You are great!