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Edge

A precipitous drop

There are Magisters, those gifted with the power of magic, and the Humans, those without. We are different subspecies: interbreeding carries its own risks.
— Lieutenant Auriel, Society of Magisters
  The rare, genetic condition Edge pops up when a family bloodline is close to the levels of genes necessary to exploit the Luck-Intent Magic System, but not quite. This causes the evolutionary fitness of those within a certain threshold of the limit to drastically decline. For some, it causes hallucinations, while others report unreasonable anxiety.

Causes

The cause of the disease is the speciation of the magisters. Being of a different subspecies than humans, there are barriers to reproduction, although we can, and of course still are, operating our interbreeding operation. And, too, there is a price one must pay to gain access to magic.
— Lieutenant Auriel
  The disease is caused by defects in the genome, although no one in the world knows of this, nor of the existence of the genome. Instead, they attribute it to one or more of three things. The first is "the disease of the mind", a catchall term for all mental diseases. This is mostly used by humans.   Within the Society of Magisters, a group of magic-capable people, more direct terms are used. One theory is that those that fail to access the will of the gods pay a heavy price. The other is that humans and magisters have been seperated so long that interbreeding is hard and can cause a significant decrease in offspring's fitness.

Symptoms

My mind... I don't know. There's no explaining it. It's almost like the world is out to get me... I feel this fear, and I don't understand it!
— Advisor Tahuan
  The symptoms vary based on the severity of the condition. They also tend to set in during different times: for some, it shows at early adolescence, while others experience it during their adulthood. However, there are some general things in common. Many exhibit the signs shown below.   Phase I: Frayed Edge
  • Heightened anxiety: higher-than-normal levels of cortisone when confronted with highly stressful issues.
  • Withdrawal: many on the frayed edge begin withdrawing from their friends, trusting only those in their inner circle.
  • Susceptibility: they are more susceptible to other, more mundane diseases like a common cold or flu.
  Phase II: Knife's Edge
  • Paranoia: High stress on even normal issues, often believes that the world or government is "out to get them".
  • Distrust: By this stage, the person has likely withdrawn their trust from nearly everyone. In some cases, they confide trust in one person (the confidante), while in others they trust absolutely no one.
  • Hallucinations: These may include voices in one's head, full visual hallucinations (some report "talking to Kali"), and tactile out-of-place sensations. These may be followed by passing out.
  Phase III: Cutting Edge   The symptoms in this phase is like Phase II, but much more severe. For example, Aldrich Aban was a late-onset Edge sufferer. By phase three, he had his best generals and admirals murdered or jailed due to him worrying about their loyalty, while believing himself that he was executing Kali's will. Estimated life span beyond phase three ranges from two to five years.

Treatment

The afflicted individual is to be contained immediately once symptoms are severe. They are to be kept out of range of any weapons and put under house arrest. That way, they don't do too much damage.
— Protocol 5
  There isn't much treatment for this disease, besides immediate house arrest and supervision. The prognosis of the disease is death within anywhere from five to ten years. In some cases, diseased people will be killed immediately, due to their threat to the community.
Type
Genetic
Prognosis
Death within a decade
Famous sufferers
Aryl Aban
Aldrich Aban
Chief Advisor Tahuan
Species afflicted
Human
Occurrence
Rare (1 in 20,000)

The Eye of Edge

I guess if there's one good thing about Edge, it's the Eye. But even that's terrible.
— Lieutenant Auriel
  The Eye of Edge is an uncommon, but not rare condition within Edge. The Eye allows people to perceive events that will occur, most usually within an hour or several hours. These events observed are all negative towards the interests of the viewer: maybe a great flood, or a fire. However, this Eye allows others to prepare for the coming of the event, and minimize loss of property and life.  
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The Setting

 
Ironfoot Isles
Geographic Location | Jan 21, 2019

The main setting of the Seas of Steel

 

An Afflicted Family

 
House Aban
Organization | Jan 29, 2019

One of the most influential royal houses of the Seas of Steel. It controls the Federation.


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Jan 27, 2019 05:39 by Lyraine Alei

This does read a lot like a medical text, as E.A. Saturn says, and that lends this article an air of authority (as well as some sense of Unreliable Narrator, which is fun).   I'm curious, however, as to how prevalent is this condition in the population? Are there any methods used to try and prevent contracting The Edge, any methods the text has to disprove despite prevalent folklore insisting it works (Carl Sagan's The Cosmos had an episode disproving Astrology, and this came to mind while I was reading your article about "Who has spent an hour explaining how this folklore doesn't really work?")?   Also, very clever and sneaky, getting your Family Affairs family in connection to this condition. (Am kidding, am kidding.)

Lyraine, Consumer of Lore, She/Her, primary project: Corive
Jan 27, 2019 05:41 by Lyraine Alei

Oh! I forgot! Who is this Lieutenant Auriel and why is he important enough to be quoted twice?

Lyraine, Consumer of Lore, She/Her, primary project: Corive
Jan 27, 2019 13:11

Ah, well, I’m pretty sure I put 1 in 20,000 in the sidebar, could you check that it shows up for you? And prevention wise it’s rare enough that it sometimes is attributed to demonic possession and stuff. Lieutenant Auriel is one of my characters, a magic capable person who has to contain and sometimes kill these guys.

Jan 27, 2019 06:01 by Elson the Ye Olde Dwarf

I liked the article, though I'm not so sure that I quite understood it? Mainly a few questions which I think need detailing more;     - Is Edge a Birth Defect or is it a Developed one?   - From the opening paragraph, I'm thinking of it as quite visible, perhaps like muscular dystrophy. Is this accurate or else wise?   - The second paragraph in 'Causes', I find it as hard to understand in ways. For example, there is no real indication as to what causes Edge, but it hints to it being an interspecies breeding kind of problem (like Donkeys and Horses). If so, would it be possible to expand on the difference between humans and magisters in this article? It might serve to help explain things better.   Loving the work, and hope this helps!

Jan 27, 2019 06:01 by Elson the Ye Olde Dwarf

Sorry about the deleting and re-posting, I couldn't figure out the formatting in comments ^^;

Jan 27, 2019 13:12

Think of edge like Alzheimer’s: it May onset at different times, but it is visible, extremely so, once it has onset. And I will work on expanding ASAP!

Jan 27, 2019 23:47 by Elson the Ye Olde Dwarf

Right, that makes so much more sense now! ^^;   Then perhaps it would be an idea to call it a strain of a similar disease, fictional or otherwise. It might be a good way to explain more without having to write tonnes of exposition.

Jan 29, 2019 23:23 by Koray Birenheide

Man, your phases word-play is off the hook xD

Jan 29, 2019 23:28

:) benefits of being an english speaker

Jan 29, 2019 23:40 by Koray Birenheide

Those are fighting words! takes of shirt