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Survey of the Makeyan Archipelago

Survey of the Makeyan Archipelago is the illustrated journal of Captain Oramas Emmara Nalu of the Wailing Gull. The journal records a six year expedition to map the islands of Makeya. While the larger islands were known to each other, many of the smaller and more distant islands remain disconnected from all but their immediate neighbors. Emmara Nalu's sketches and diary entries capture the culture and history of each island just before the founding of the Guild.   In the early years of the Guild's leadership, the Survey and Emmara Nalu's map were reproduced in woodblock prints and distributed throughout the islands to encourage unity and the sharing of knowledge. Today, a copy of the Survey is held at every Guild Hall around the world, and Makeyan children are taught to model their own logs after Emmara Nalu's journal. The Survey has been translated into many local vernaculars, including Calan and Naleedic, but it has not achieved the same popularity in other nations due to the knowledge of Makeyan culture needed to understand many of the entries.  

The Journey

Emmara Nalu sailed from Oramas in 7 BGE with a crew of ten. Beginning with the northernmost island of Haluma, the Wailing Gull visited and mapped every island in the archipelago over the course of five years. After completing the map at the southernmost island of Rulias, the Wailing Gull returned to her home port of Oramas.   Over the course of the journey, Emmara Nalu witnessed the aftermath of several brutal pirate raids on the smaller islands of the archipelago, and was deeply moved by the devestation. Inspired by the unity of the three islands of Nofiso, she sought to unite the Makeyan islands under one banner to better defend against such raids and improve their trading prospects. The Wailing Gull made port at every island on the return trip to Oramas so Emmara Nalu could begin advocating for unity. One year after the completion of the Survey, Emmara Nalu founded the Guild, which governs and protects the Makeyan archipelago to this day.
Type
Journal, Personal
Medium
Paper
Authoring Date
7 BGE - 1 BGE
Location
by LadyRis

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May 25, 2019 16:26 by Elias Redclaw

While i wouldnt say that this is a bad article, it does need more improving. First of all though i all talk about what you did good about the article. You manage to document the journey of the crew extremely well. The way you write and describe each entry in the journal makes it very interesting to read! The thing here is that there isnt much meat to the article. What was the social and cultural impact of this voyage? What is the legacy of this journal? Additionally, you could throw in some quotes there to make it look more interesting! I am sorry if i came off as rude though, this article was not bad at all! Just hammer it a bit more and it will be fine! Congrats!

May 26, 2019 14:13 by Ris

Thank you for the feedback, friend. I appreciate it. I'm not sure how many more ways I can express "this document is the reason the islands united under one government", but I'll take another look and see if there's anything I can do. I'm skirting close to the word count at this point.

May 29, 2019 23:54 by Stormbril

What a lovely article! I enjoyed reading this a lot, it felt a bit like a "slice of life" style journal, with a few more heavy hitting entries. Really well done. I liked all the distinct differences between the islands, and how many journal entries there were! I'd really like to see some sketches of the islands if possible as well!   A couple small things:   I think it'd be really beneficial to add some sort of timeline, or explanation of the date/time system. While reading the document I found myself wondering what old, young, childs moons were, how far apart they were etc. A small image showing how often the moon changes, how many days between each, would be nice!   A second smaller thing, I'd love to see more tooltips on linked articles! I see you have plenty of articles linked in this one, next step would be giving them a short description via tooltips to help the reader out.   Great job on this entry! The favourites it's earned are well deserved.

May 30, 2019 13:30 by Ris

Thank you for the feedback, friend! This is super helpful.   I did actually finish two sketches for the journal, but had no access to a scanner and couldn't get the file size down. I'll see if I can't give that another shot.   I really should get around to making an article for the calendar in this world...I'll see if I can make an image. In the meantime, for your own knowledge: the calendar has ten moons/months, each 35 days long.   Tooltips are something I have not used before! I'll see if I can figure them out and give them a try.   Thanks! <3