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Sea Happenings

by hughpierre
The Salting
Physical / Metaphysical Law | Jul 12, 2024

"The Salting", is the popular name given to a large-scale industrial accident that occurred in 2087 at the NanoForge semiconductor fabrication complex.

Thermal Baths
Building / Landmark | Sep 10, 2024

"Warm Baths provide relief from the stinging cold. Fortify & Beautify!"

tide wishes
Language | Aug 3, 2024

I present a collection of phrases involving tides, a remnant of our ancestors' ocean worship.

The inclusion of specific details (e.g., organophosphates, hazmat suits, phosphorus contamination) gives the piece a sense of realism and believability. Adding well-researched details helps ground the fictional writing with real-world-sounding science or technology; enhancing the credibility of the narrative. A valuable lesson is the balance between descriptive imagery and pacing. While detailed descriptions are essential, it is important to maintain narrative flow by not overwhelming the reader with too much detail at once. The tone is consistent throughout. Each expression is explained succinctly, making the content accessible without unnecessary elaboration. It hints at a rich history and ties language to the environment; making the setting feel lived-in.
The Gloaming Well
Geographic Location | Aug 3, 2024
Mortalitatis Finis
Condition | Jul 12, 2024
Shows subtle changes in the Well's influence through character reactions and environmental changes are more impactful than just stating them. This one fluctuates between historical exposition and narrative description, with a focus on humanizing key figures.
Calinan Sea Trade Agreement
Document | Jul 11, 2024
Salt-Maggots
Species | Sep 9, 2024
The use of headings and subheadings to structure a dense topic, makes the complex political and legal issues accessible and engaging. A key takeaway is the importance of metaphors to tie abstract emotional concepts to physical, tangible elements. This enhances the reader's connection to the narrative and deepens the impact of the world-building.

Lord Paramount of the Dragontide Vanguard
Rank/Title | Jul 31, 2024
Cocodrile breeder
Profession | Aug 1, 2024
Tidal Birth
Tradition / Ritual | Jul 22, 2024
The author makes it easy to follow and understand the Lord's role. It is not particularly wordy, but it does this job in introducing the setting and expectations. Does an excellent job of drawing in readers. It is just yay short of being its own hook for an adventure. A portrayal of familial bonding that incorporates the sense of a warm touch as part of a very visual setting.

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Aug 24, 2024 10:05

Thanks for including Salt-Maggots in your list!