The Loss
Born two years after
The Last Great War, within the Reading district, Carolina's early childhood was marked by illnesses. At the time, the bio-dome over Reading was still being constructed and toxic winds often blew in from the wastelands. Luckily, Carolina had a rich aunt in the more affluent district of Guildford; at the age of 3 Carolina's parents arranged for her a short recuperation.
Carolina would never return to her parents, within days her aunt informed her that both her parents had died of a lung infection.
The Lie
Carolina's aunt was the childless Governess of the Guildford District, she was good to Carolina. However, Carolina still carried a great sadness about the death of her parents. Carolina's aunt believed that music could heal her niece's heartbreak and so Carolina had lessons and learned to play a range of classical instruments, including Clarinet, Violin, Cello, Flute, and Harp, but it was at singing that Carolina excelled.
Her aunt doted upon her, and Carolina loved her aunt, but as she grew in age and confidence a rebellious streak arose within her.
There was a new genre of music sweeping the slums that surrounded the bio-domed areas of the city, called
Dark Techno Music, it was raw, powerful, defiant and spoke to the pain that Carolina had never let go. She began to sneak away from school to hang out with a group of young musicians practicing out of an abandoned warehouse north of the bio-dome; to their heavy rifts her operatic vocals brought forth a deep emotional tone that resonated to all who heard it. It was not long before her aunt found out and limted her movements. Initially this angered Carolina, but she loved music and persisted with her practices, her aunt assuring her that she could get a place within the
Operatic Guild and access to
The City.
Then it was all stolen away. One afternoon, aged 16, and bored of practicing the same pieces over and over again, Carolina snuck in to her aunt's private retiring room. While searching the shelves for a more interesting piece she found a stack of letters, bound in simple brown ribbon. On poor quality paper, in faded ink and written with a shaking hand was a terrible truth; her parents had not died when she was 3 years old. Instead, her aunt had refused to return her after her restbite. For years her parents had tried to contact her, they had begged and pleaded, offered supplication and beseeched her aunt's better nature, but it had fallen on deaf ears. Upon reading the letters a great fire erupted in Carolina.
That evening, her aunt found Carolina and the letters waiting for her in the lounge. The conversation was brief but heated, her aunt did not deny the content, but chastised her for skulking around and for being unappreciative of the better life that she had given her. Carolina went to leave, her aunt threatened to cut her off if she left. Carolina left anyway.
The Lover
Initially Carolina lived with her
Dark Techno group, but it was a hard life. Many of them were without parents, often living in ruined buildings, and eating only when they could afford to or steal enough to survive. Opportunities for work were limited, for most, criminality was the only job going, and they were the sorts of jobs where you either "got good" or you "got dead". Within the space of 2 years almost everyone she had known "got dead". Carolina's talents as a singer saved her, and allowed her to gain work in the club of
Jerome Drax. It was there that she met
Jennifer Drax, Jerome's sister.
Jerome's clubs were
Audioniums, places which used music, visuals, and clouds of narcotics to create a transcendent way to experience music. For Carolina this was another revelation in her musical development, and she spent many hours talking and working with the technicians who ran and maintained those aspects of the show.
Jerome did not appreciate the impact he felt this 19-year-old, mousy musician was having on his employees, but
Jennifer insisted that he indulge her, and to even allow her to compose a few pieces for private clients.
Jennifer's interventions drew Carolina to her. Their relationship was quiet, built in the moments they could snatch outside of
Jerome's gaze. To Carolina,
Jennifer was worldly and mysterious, a key part in her brother's operations, though initially Carolina did not know exactly what she did. A few months in to their relationship that Carolina discovered that
Jennifer was an assassin, taking out low-level targets on behalf of her brother's operations. While the gritty nature of the work scared Carolina, she trusted
Jennifer.
Their liaison did not go unnoticed,
Jerome continuing to be annoyed by the impact her felt Carolina was having on his sister, however Carolina was growing in popularity, and
Jennifer continued to insist that he treat Carolina with respect.
The Liability
Despite the difficult conditions in living outside the bio-dome, Carolina was finally starting to feel at home away from the long reach of her aunt, but it was not to be.
Even though the corporate networks didn't server
Dark Londinium, news reached them that the Governess, her aunt, was dying. It seemed that her aunt had finally offered a reward for her niece’s return, the likenesses that were circulated, while not taking in to consideration the effects of 3 years living outside the bio-dome, were a close enough match that
Jerome made the connection.
One evening, as she left the club,
Jerome confronted her about it, she'd brushed off his suggestion that she was heiress to the Governess, but he persisted, following her in to the cold dark alley outside. Through planning or through luck
Jennifer was just returning at the same time.
Jerome shouted at Carolina, Carolina tried to ignore him, but he made a grab for her.
Jennifer intervened, grabbing
Jerome's wrist.
Her steely gaze unwavering,
Jennifer told him to back off, but
Jerome was having none of it. He was sick of babysitting his sister, and indulging her stupid lover. As Carolina watched there was a flash of a blade as
Jerome drew his knife. This was followed by a second flash as
Jennifer drew hers.
Jerome was strong, but
Jennifer was quick, and in the acrid twilight Carolina watched as Jerome fell to the floor; a pool of blood, jet black, spread from his torso as
Jennifer stood above him.
Jennifer seemed completely calm, she entered the club, and returned with
Andrius Drax, her cousin and Jerome's second in command. She told him how a rival gang had attacked Carolina, how
Jerome had intervened, and been killed in the process.
The week that followed was a blur, in
Jennifer's apartment Carolina mainly slept. Her dreams filled with images of
Jerome's face as he fell to the floor, or of her aunt, dying alone. When she was awake she cursed herself for her stupidity.
Jennifer came and went, sort the fallout of
Jerome's death.
Andrius knew the story wasn't true, but
Jerome's empire was now his, and he had
big plans.
Jennifer confirmed that her aunt was indeed dying, and still desperate to make amends with her lost 'daughter'.
Jennifer assured her that
Andrius was working on a way to get them both back within the bio-dome. Carolina was, by all accounts, soon to be a very wealthy heir.
The Liberation
Three days later, dressed in a scruffy leather jacket with orange trim, and torn worker trousers Carolina was reunited with her aunt, while
Jennifer waited awkwardly in the reception of the house, overseen by a butler who did little to hide his contempt.
Carolina and her aunt spoke for hours, the contents of their discussion being too personal to respectfully share here, but in the end they were reconciled. Carolina, heir to one of the last great fortunes of Britain, would return to the bio-dome and engage her passion for music.
Unwilling to lose the only person she had ever trusted Carolina arranged that
Jennifer remain in the bio-dome, in time she would have many tasks, including assistant, bodyguard and eventually manager. While Carolina felt that her and Jennifer had an opportunity to start a new life, Jennifer was reluctant to leave her old world behind, and much to Carolina's chagrin, even continued to communicate and work for her cousin
Andrius. Once Carolina has reached mass popularity Jennifer began to take advantage of their ability to travel between the districts to again work as an assassin, supporting her cousin's ever growing criminal empire by eliminating high value targets.
Carolina considered dismissing
Jennifer, but ultimately, her love and dependence upon her stayed her hand. For her part, Jennifer was expert assassin, and skilled at leaving no clues which prevented anything being tied back to her or Carolina.
Great article! I love Carolina's story and her complex relationships with her aunt and Jennifer :D I imagine some people in the biodomes and the city must dislike Carolina and her "bad influence". Have they tried to do anything against her? Or do her fortune protects her?
Hi Amélie, thank you :) it's my first attempt so it's great to have some feedback. Thanks for you question as well, the original draft did actually talk about people's reception to her more. But, then I discovered that I'd accidently written 4,000 words (I didn't originally notice the 2,500 word limit, either) so I had to do a bit of editing, so now it's only touched upon. You are quite correct, some of her works are seen as subversive, the reason she gets away with it, as it were, are probably threefold: 1. The City is very insular, and rather arrogant, so they don't actually see her, or anyone, as a threat. 2. The rich of the Guildford bio-dome do respect her lineage, and her wealth; but also they view her as a bit of an oddity (there's a bit of 'The Savage' from Brave New World in it) she's a novelty, and while she represents rebellion she's also one of them and so kind of a 'safe rebellion'. This is actually part of Carolina's juxterposed view of her position, and why she can sometimes be reactionary for effect. 3. While The City is very secure, the districts have a greater dependency on their outlying areas, and thanks to Carolina's desire to provide her music to these regions she has a lot of popular support. None of this is intentional, at least on the part of Carolina, she is amazingly talented, but there is a reason that she relies upon Jennifer so much, Jennifer can get stuff done, Jennifer can make stuff happen. While this is a new world for me, I am enjoying working on it, if I continue the narrative then I envisage a situation in which Jennifer will use her 'specialist skills' to eliminate a threat to Carolina, without Carolina being aware, before it comes to light later. If that does come to pass then Carolina will ask her about it, and Jennifer will just shrug and say something like "Sure, lots of times". I think I'd like to explore the juxtaposition between Carolina's world view and Jennifer's more, and highlight why they actually need each other emotionally, rather than just practically. 2,500 words is too much to constrain my imagination :-D. Hopefully that covers you question, and then some more things :-), I will have a review and see if I can bring some of this across a bit better, thank you. I will most certainly also check out your entry, and also the world around it, I love alternative worlds, especially when they have a historical-fantasy angle!
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Ah that terrible word count limit... I know the pain :( Thanks for you answer! This is more or less what I inferred from the article :D Ah yes, Carolina does strike me as still naïve and a bit wilfully blind sometimes. I was sure Jennifer was doing things to "help" her p
Morning Amélie, I've given it a slight tweak based on your suggestion, thank you. I think Carolina's been lucky, her initial privilage and her talent has got her the support she needs, so you are right she can afford to be wilfully blind and rebellious. I can only imagine how annoying it must be for Jennifer sometimes!
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