Meeting in the West
Kkamol and Makai were locked in a conversation of the wonders of the palace in their native language, when a young boy, a servant to the Empire, approached them. "Follow me," the boy said, timidly glancing at the ground. "The conference is about to start." Makai spoke the sentence to Kkamol, the pair rising to follow the boy. He gave a curious glance at the pair, hesitating at Makai, before turning to the halls of the palace. The boy led them up several flights of stairs and into a large room, hastening his natural pace to keep mere steps ahead of them. "Here you are." He pointed them into the room before quickly leaving to head his own way. They entered the room, wafts of cold air flooding over them as the enormous, iron-clad, wooden doors closed with a blast of air. The room itself was bright, though cold despite all the vibrant white. The ceilings were vaulted, arches dozens of meters in the air sustained large white pillars gilded with intricate symbols and marks. The room was near empty, only a long table with a map drawn across it was visible. Several men, one other with a translator, stood at the map, engaged in slow conversation. Kkamol stepped up to the table, Makai a step behind him. In a loud voice, echoing in the empty room, he introduced himself while Makai translated his words, "ʆʆɑԏҟҟɑɤʆʫʆʆɑԏჺᶚſſԏⴉ ҟҟɑⴉɤʆϡჺჺԏɑჺ." "Welcome. I believe that we can begin this meeting now that all of us are here." One of the men, lacking a translator, spoke up. His voice was deep, resounding through the room in his layered accent. Makai, standing at Kkamol's shoulder, whispered the Ahkalba translation of the man's words, softly enough that only Kkamol could hear. "I am Garaman Pokoral, the Emperor of the Maraian Empire." The others followed, introducing themselves as members of different organizations. There were many members present, the most significant of which were those from the Kingdom of Itania, the Kingdom of Kin, and the historically aloof Sorcerer's Federation of Sel. Garaman was the first to speak up following the introductions, voicing his concern over the East, "The Khiz began small, but they are spreading fast. Word from the Kappag Mediary claims that they have yet to reach their Western Division, but are striking against the lower regions of the North and upper regions of East. "We, as a united force, need to decide who to aid in this fight. Will the Khiz run their course before falling apart of their own inhibition, shall they rise to reign as a superpower in the East, or should we fight them back in hopes of finding history on our side?" He paused, looking with worried eyes and a tense face. His gaze looked to each of the members at the table, the soft whisper of translators falling silent. No one wanted to speak up, afraid to make the wrong decision. Kkamol filled the prolonged silence with words of his own, struggling with the foreign names. "ϸϸɑէɤʆʫʆʆɑԏҟᶚⴉⴉԏⴉ Khiz ɑɤϸɑԏʆԏɑէſſ ϡɀɑɤҟɑ." The silence fell to shambles, collecting on the floor like water from the rain. The room's sounds were amplified, words of discord and disagreement being tossed around. In the noise, Garaman was the only one to hold his silence; rather, he listened to the arguments before interjecting with a loud and sudden, "We are meant to be working together, not biting at each other's necks." Makai resumed her job, having fallen silent during the shouting match -- managing to equally silence Kkamol. The voices of representatives each fell to nothing more than quiet murmurs, the representatives all ashamedly casting their gaze to the table. Garaman didn't stop speaking, though he directed his attention to Kkamol as he redirected the topic. "Why do you feel we should fight them?" "ԏⴉɤ ѓѓɑɤſſԏɑҟʫϸɑҟᶚⴉⴉԏⴉ ϡҟҟɑɤҟſ ɑɤϸɑԏʆԏɑէſſ Khiz ɑɤϸɑԏʆԏɑէſſ." Kkamol replied, considering his phrasing carefully. Garaman nodded, acknowledging Makai as she translated. Akaol, a member from the Kingdom of Itania, spoke up, "The Khiz are powerful. You -" he pointed to Garaman "- even claimed that they began small but have begun to wipe out huge parts of the Eastern Continents. If we aided them, we could even gain their favor in trade." "To throw the trade between us and the East out the window? The Khiz are already slowing down. A strong pushback could wipe them out," spoke up Oalam, a second representative from the Kingdom of Itania. Akaol gave Oalam a dark look, seeming frustrated by their disagreement. Kkamol, still listening to Makai's hushed translation, was slow to follow the conversation. "Their government is weak, to Oalam's point," Garaman chimed in. "ԏⴉɤ ϸϸԏɑſԏɤҟʫϸɑҟᶚſſԏⴉ ϡϸɑҟɑɤʆⴉ ɑɤϸɑԏʆԏɑէſſ?" Kkamol questioned, hastening to keep pace with the conversation, Makai slowly falling behind. The others, especially those who had remained the quietest, seemed to pause. "What is their political structure, if it's so weak?" Akaol questioned. "They have a monarchy, though Kappag mentioned that the attacks have slowed due to a rumored struggle in the hierarchy between the Emperor and the Council of Wishes as the current Emperor is trying to rise into power, supposedly nearing tyranny. In the case of which, a strong enough attack could lead to the fall of the Khiz Empire." The conversation carried on, a dignity upheld following the collapse before. It shifted slowly, gathering steam and strength in a direction opposing the Khiz. The collected representatives spoke their way around the table, offering each a piece of their own mind. Closing the meeting, Garaman Pokoral, the Emperor of the Maraian Empire, offered the closing remarks. "On behalf of the Maraian Empire and our allies in the East, I want to thank all of you for coming out of your way to visit us here and each offering your army's strength to fight against the Khiz." So marked the beginning of the end of the Khiz Empire as a planned strike back against them felled their ruler. A period, often called the Reclaiming, following of which in where the Western armies returned allowing the armies of the Kappag Mediary to recollect the land stollen by the Khiz Empire. Kkamol, leaving the city behind, returned to his own home country of the Daw'lni Collective. Stepping forwards upon his return, he -- following through with his claims at the meeting -- lead forth a strike with his army, acting as a commanding general in the Reclaiming.
For the extended information on the involved langauge, Ahkalba, and to understand the translations, visit my article on the language itself:
Hey! I had actually read some of this earlier haha. Here's my thoughts; A few minor typos, "use" instead of "us", "corse" instead of "course", etc. "...and the, historically aloof, Sorcerer's Federation of Sel." Both of those commas are unnecessary. "He paused in this lapse in his speech..." Said he paused and also noting a lapse in his speech seems redundant. I think you can just say "He then paused, looking about..." and get it across. Overall I really like this article! I think with a quick grammar pass and this small edits it'd be really solid! Great job!