Book Plot

A chronological guide to development of the plot of a book

  • 1


    Sequence 1 Set-up Foreshadowing & Challenge

    Grab the reader and set up the book in 10k words = the hero, the world, the stakes and the conflict.

  • 10


    Ordnary World

    The Heros lack

  • 20


    Disturbance

    Something is wrong

  • 30


    Care Package

    Something tender that makes me like the protagonist

  • 40


    Trouble Brewing

    A problem arises

  • 50


    Q Factor Lead In

    The key to the Ultimate solution is introduced (gadgets, symbols of courage)

  • 100


    Sequence 2:Responding to the Challenge

    Show the hero's response to the challenge and take him to the point where he consciously considers then balks at the challenge (refuse the call) then accepts it.

  • 110


    Incitng Incident

    Call to Adventure

  • 120


    Argument against Transformation

    The protagonist argues against the position they will ultimately take

  • 130


    1st Door of No Return

    The protagonist is pushed out of their comfort zone and into action

  • 200


    Sequence 3: Responding to the Strange New World

    Hero tries his first solutions/adpatations to his "new world" (situation) where he proves his ignorance/incompetence by doing all the logical stuff that isn't going to work.

  • 210


    1st Plot Point

    Point of no return Reveal - What is going on?

  • 300


    Sequence 4: First Attempt, First Failure & Consequences

    Hero makes first attempt to act to solve the problem - and fails - culminates in midpoint when the hero discovers what is REALLY going on... and can stop acting in ignorance.

  • 310


    1st Pinch Point

    The first battle (fails due to ignorant incompetence)

  • 320


    Kick in the shins

    The antagonist makes his first appearance (may be henchman) hero becomes aware of antagonist

  • 400


    The Midpoint

    The hero enters the phase of "conscious incompetence"

  • 410


    Midpoint

    Shift from victim to warrior Reveal - Who is Doing this? - reader probably already knows.

  • 420


    Mirror Moment

    Hero faces truth: "Who am I?" or "I am going to die."

  • 430


    Pet the dog

    A moment of kindness or courage

  • 500


    Sequence 5: Reacting to the Midpoint & Raising the Stakes

    The hero reacts to the "real problem" revelation, then acts to redeem himself, now understanding what he needs and how to act better to solve problem. Plans the second attempt and deals with aftermath of failure.

  • 510


    2nd Pinch Point

    Second Battle Fails due to over confidence

  • 520


    2nd Door of No Return

    Pressure on the hero kicks into high gear

  • 540


    Mounting Forces

    Bad guys ramp it up

  • 600


    Sequence 6: The Second Attemp, the Fall & Crisis

    Setup to climax - everything falls apart - the hero's darkest hour includes the mirror moment. Hero is doomed to failure due to some action or inaction on his part. Includes new plan, action and failure of that plan.

  • 610


    2nd Plot Point

    Dark Night of the Soul Reveal - Why are they doing it?

  • 620


    Lights Out

    The Hero has lost

  • 640


    The Q Factor

    The q factor arrives to provide hope / courage / a path forward

  • 700


    Sequence 7: the Climax

    The final battle - the climax - the big scene...

  • 710


    Final Battle

    Triumph and Knowledge

  • 720


    The Final Battle

    The BBEG fight

  • 800


    Sequence 8: Resolution and Denouement

    The end (rest) of the story. Ties up loose ends.

  • 830


    Tansformation

    The ending that shows where the cards are now and sells the next book