Reading challange 2023
The conditions
- The article you submit needs to be at least 1000 words long. There's no maximum word count.
- You may enter with more than 9 articles if you want to, but there are no extra badges beyond the participation one.
- The article must be submitted before the closing time to be eligible, and it must be public and published.
- Only one article may be submitted per person (this does not mean one article per world, in cases where multiple authors work on a single world).
Well let's do it
Prompts
An organisation dedicated to keeping a major secret from the public
1.I love this idea of an organization focussing on dreams. The article itself is simple, but informative. Keep this up and 'Keep on dreaming.'
This article is small, but tells a lot about your world. At least this part of it. Nice that you placed a content warning at the top as well.
A nice, elegant and yet powerful article. The only problem that I have is the sidebar, which those not make any sense being there empty. Maybe after all the judging is over you can fill it out or remove it. But furthermore I like what I see so far, a <3 from me and keep on writting.
I love this article with every fiber that I got. It is nice consistent and the text has a nice flow to it. I also love that the background is transparent and you can see the ship, which gives it another element.
This is not so much as an organization article, this is a story. A small story inside your world that needed to be told.
a cuisine from a sparse, barren or remote region in your world
6.For me personally a recipe in this type article brings the world more to life. Makes it relatable, and I can see making this at home. My compliments, now I am hungry. Now for the feedback, I have none.
This article is really something else in a good way. I personally love to see recipes when we talk about food. It makes it more real and relatable. I liked the little box at the end, which is linked to another article which is claverly done.
Lovely article, love the way you described it. The ingredients fall a bit into nothing in the little wall of text. But they are there, so that is a more personal thing. But this article reads like something you would find inside a cookbook.
I love the way you described this all. I would have loved to see a recipe of some sorts, to show off a little building. This is a personal preference.
I love the article, about a simple, not so simple fish cuisine that you have described in two different ways. Something for everybody.
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