Midnight's Notes: The World Fair

by Midnight Erebus

Judge Notes:

Nicholas - 3.5/5
Mushroom experiments
Great concept.
Could dig a cave system around the Silver Thimble, farm them using water brought in from central pool? They didn't suggest it but maybe will offer the suggestion to the city planners.
Experimentation methods could use work. Randomly throwing mushrooms at problems is a good way to get people poisoned.

Otter with the Horse Experiment - 2/5
Capturing big and small creatures and vivisecting them to study for more normal sized creatures.
Seems needlessly cruel? Like even as a hunter myself I'm unsettled by that.
Why not look into better meat processing methods? Larger butchering teams with large cutting equipment? Magic assistance? Ruins the challenge of the hunts?
Capturing method too rudimentary... no detailed plan to use ALL the material brought to them.
Why not invest in rift research to bring creatures here?

Millie Bays - 1/5
Chemical "semi-sentient" cleaning slime
OH GOD THE SMELL! KILL ME KILL ME KILL ME! Ginger scent it or something! MY NOOOOOOOSE

Akhana - 4/5
Communication crystal accessorization
Endless possible uses. Akhana doesn't realize the full implications of what we have.
This goes well beyond normal communication uses. The audience bringing up personal broadcasting and music broadcasting were right on the money.
The danger of the crystals is concerning.

Peanut & Rupert - 4/5
Digging a hole to the other side of Liminal
Is Liminal actually flat or otherwise unusual shaped? I know Meterra is spherical. There is a whole wide variety of reasons that is the shape that makes the most sense but Liminal is not normal.
Dungeons? There are dungeons underground? Interesting.... I'd love to delve them. Underground ruins in my world are plentiful, but that's due to old civilizations. Occasionally you'll find things living in them, but rarely have they don't more than repair what was already there.
What kind of equipment are they actually going to build? It's intriguing.

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Midnight Erebus's Bestiary, Page 2

Midnight Erebus's Bestiary, Page 1

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Midnight's Old Journal, 01/01/3541
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100 Questions About Midnight, Part 2 - Past Influences, Beliefs and Opinions

100 Questions About Midnight, Part 3 - Relationships with Others, Likes and Dislikes

100 Questions About Midnight, Part 4 - Self Images and Etc.

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Midnight's Personal Journal: After Call My Name

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Midnight's Private Journal: After The Ascension

Midnight's Private Journal: After Ante Up

Midnight's Private Journal: After Teeth

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Midnight's Journal: After Hello Tomorrow

Midnight's Journal: After Pretty Little Things

Midnight's Journal: An Interesting New Sword

Midnight's Journal: After R.Y.L.A.H.

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Midnight's Journal: After Palm Reader

Midnight's Journal: After Bookwyrm

Midnight's Journal: After Veldt

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Midnight's Journal: After A Bard's Tale

Midnight's Journal: After Valhalla's Calling

Midnight's Journal: After Broken

Midnight's Journal: After They Know Me

Midnight's Journal: After Welcome to the World

Midnight's Journal: After Villainous Thing

Midnight's Journal: After Curses

Midnight's Journal: "The Librarian's Defeat"

Midnight's Journal: "The World Changes"

Midnight's Journal: After Sleep is for the Weak

Midnight's Journal: After creature

Midnight's Journal: After Dear Fellow Traveler

Midnight's Report: After Love From The Other Side

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Midnight's Journal: A Story to a Giant

Midnight's Journal: Constellations

Midnight's Report: Wolf

Midnight's Report: Of Bees and Bones

Midnight's Report: Building Steam (Flower and Geoff)

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